第一節(jié)命題作文(滿分15分)

假定你是高一新生李華，你的英國筆友Fred來信詢問你入學第一天的情況。請你給他回一封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 介紹學校的環(huán)境2. 談?wù)剬蠋熀屯瑢W的印象3. 你對高中生活的決心

I am delighted to hear from you. As you know, my new school life has already begun. My new school is quite large, mainly consisting of several teaching buildings, a library and a gymnasium. To my amazement, there is a beautiful lake in the campus, around which many students study after school. Meanwhile, my new teachers and classmates are both thoughtful and friendly. I easily adapt myself to my new life with their help. Lastly, I know my new life brings me not only excitement but also challenges. Therefore, I make a resolution to study harder than before in the followingthree years to realize my dream.

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我很高興收到你的來信。如你所知，我的新校園生活已經(jīng)開始了。我的新學校很大，主要是由幾幢教學樓，一座圖書館和一座體育館所構(gòu)成的。令我驚奇的是，學校里竟然還有一面湖泊，在湖泊周圍，放學后有很多同學在這里學習。與此同時，我的新老師和同學們既周到體貼又待人友好。在他們的幫助之下，我很快地適應(yīng)了我的新生活。最后，我知道我的新生活給我?guī)淼牟恢褂信d奮，更加有挑戰(zhàn)。因此，我下定決心在接下來的三年里更加努力地學習去實現(xiàn)我的夢想。

得分點簡釋：

1. be delighted to do sth 高興做某事

2. hear from sb 收到某人的來信

3. As you know 如你所知

4. consist of ... (整體) 由...個體構(gòu)成

5. To ones amazement 令某人驚訝不已的是

6. ... a beautiful lake in the campus, around which many students study... 定語從句

介詞+ which 代替關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)定語從句

7. both ... and ... 既 ... 又 ...

8. thoughtful 體貼周到的 近義詞：considerate

9. adapt oneself to sth 使某人適應(yīng)某事 近義短語：accustom oneself to sth

10. with ones help 在某人的幫助之下

11. not only ... but also ... 不僅 ... 而且 ...

12. make a resolution to do sth 下決心做某事

13. in the following three years 在接下來的三年里

第二節(jié)故事續(xù)寫(滿分25分)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

The other day I was travelling to San Antonio by train to visit my sister. The train was a little crowded and there was a young man sitting next to the window. Since it was a hot day, I wanted that window seat more than anything else at that time. As a young lady, I thought the young man would give me the seat if I asked him. So I smiled at him and asked whether he could give up his seat and take another one. To my surprise, he said he needed that seat and refused my request. I had no choice but to take the seat next to him.

The train was crossing station after station. The weather was so hot that the scenery outside the window could not attract my interest. I had nothing to do, so I started to focus my attention on the young man and stare at him up and down. He wore a blue shirt and there was a shawl (披巾) on his legs. He did not even rise from his seat once, which made me feel a little bit strange. Only a madman would use a shawl in such hot weather, I thought.

After the five-hour long journey, the train arrived at the final stop. I picked up my bag and stood up, waiting for the door to open. I gave a neglectful (不經(jīng)意的) look at the young man and asked, “The train has arrived at the final station. Are you not getting off ? ”Hearing my words, he began to smile at me and said in a calm voice, “Someone has to come for me and take me off the train because I cant do it by my self. ”I gave my full attention to his legs, only to find there was nothing under that shawl!

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汪老師參考譯文

幾天前，我乘火車前往圣安東尼奧去拜訪我的姐姐。火車有點擠，靠窗邊坐著一個男子。因為天熱，那時一個靠窗的座位是我最渴求的。作為一個年輕女士，我想如果我提出請求，這個年輕男子是會把座位讓給我的。所以，我對他嫣然一笑，并問他是否能夠調(diào)換一下座位。但令我意外的是，他說他需要那個座位并拒絕了我的請求。我別無選擇，只好坐在了他旁邊的座位上。

火車駛過了一個接一個的車站。天氣是如此的熱，以致于我無心欣賞窗外的風景。我無所事事，于是便開始把我的注意力聚焦在了這個年輕男子的身上并上下打量他。他穿一件藍色襯衫，雙腿之上覆蓋著一塊披巾。乘車期間，他甚至都沒有從座位上起過身，這讓我感到匪夷所思。我想，只有一個瘋子才會在這么熱的天還在用披巾。

在長達5個小時的漫漫旅程之后，列車終于抵達了終點站。我收拾行李準備，起身等待列車開門。此時，我不經(jīng)意地瞥了一眼這個年輕男子說，“列車已經(jīng)到終點站了。難道你還不下車嗎?”聽到我的話，他對我笑了笑并用一種平靜的聲音說道，“有人會來把我抬下火車的，因為我無法自己下車”。聽到這，我把我全部的注意力放到了他的雙腿之上，結(jié)果卻發(fā)現(xiàn)在那披巾之下空空如也！

知識點簡釋：

1. the other day 幾天前 經(jīng)常搭配一般過去時

2. be crowded 擁擠 (with ...) 近義短語：be packed with

The supermarket is crowded with customers. 超市擠滿了顧客。

3. There be 名詞 doing sth 某處有 ... 正在做 ...，例如：

There is a dog lying in the shade. 陰影中躺著一只狗。

4. next to sth 在 ... 的旁邊 近義詞(短語)：beside；close to

5. since 因為；由于 引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句

6. smile at sb 對某人微笑

7. To ones surprise 令某人意外的是

8. have no choice but to do sth 除了做某事之外，別無選擇

9. so adj / adv that 結(jié)果狀語從句 如此 ... 以致于 ...

10. focus ones attention on sth 聚精會神地關(guān)注某事

11. stare at sb 盯著某人看

12. up and down 上上下下

13. He did not even rise from his seat once, which made ...

which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句，視上下文先行詞可以是整個主句

14. a little bit 形容詞 有一點 ...

15. only to do sth 不定式做結(jié)果狀語的慣用結(jié)構(gòu)，多表示意外的，事與愿違的結(jié)果，例如：

I hurried to the station, only to find the train had already left.

我匆忙趕到車站，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)列車已經(jīng)走了。

She excitedly unpacked the parcel and tried on the new dress, only to find it was unfit for her.

她興沖沖地打開包裹試穿新裙子，結(jié)果卻發(fā)現(xiàn)新裙子不合身。

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The man was a disabled person.I felt embarrassed by what I saw. My face turned red with shame and selfishness. I shouldnt have secretly blamed him for not offering the seat next to the window to me. Meanwhile, I was so curious about his story that I couldnt help asking him what had happened to him. “It was an accident.”He paused. “To save a kid from being knocked down by a rushing train, I lost both of my legs.”He answered in a peaceful tone as if nothing had happened to him at all.

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這個男子竟然是一個殘疾人。我被我所看到的情況感到尷尬。我的臉因為羞愧和自私而變得通紅。我本不應(yīng)該暗自責怪他不為我提供靠窗的座位。與此同時，我也對他的故事感到如此的好奇，以致于我忍不住問他他遭遇了什么事。“那是一個意外。”他稍作停頓。“為了救一個孩子不被飛馳的火車給撞倒，我失去了我的雙腿。”他用一種平靜的語調(diào)述說著，就好像在他身上什么都沒有發(fā)生過似的。

得分點簡釋：

1. feel embarrassed 感到尷尬

2. turn red with shame and selfishness(臉)因為羞愧和自私而變紅

3. shouldnt have done sth 過去本不應(yīng)該做某事，但實際上卻做了

4. blame sb for sth 因某事而責怪某人

5. offer sth to sb 提供某物給某人

6. be curious about sth 對某事感到好奇

7. cant help doing sth 忍不住做某事

8. 某事happen to sb 某事發(fā)生降臨到某人身上

9. pause 暫停

10. save sb from sth 拯救某人免受某事

11. be knocked down 被撞倒

12. both of 名詞復(fù)數(shù) 一雙 ...

13. in a peaceful tone 用一種平靜的語調(diào)

14. as if 似乎；好像

as if / though引導(dǎo)的方式狀語從句可以使用“虛擬語氣”表示一種與真實情況相反的假設(shè)

14.1如表示“與現(xiàn)在事實相反的假設(shè)”，從句用一般過去時，be動詞用were

He acts as if he knew you. (摘抄)

他的舉止好像他認識你似的。(事實上并不認識)

14.2如表示“與過去事實相反的假設(shè)”，從句用had + 動詞過去分詞

He talks about pyramids as though he had seen them himself. (摘抄)

他談?wù)摻鹱炙秃孟袼?jīng)親眼見過似的。(事實上并沒見過)

15. not ... at all 根本不

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After hearing his story, I could not meet his eyes anymore.What he said completely shocked me and made me speechless. When I was at a loss, the people he had been waiting for appeared and started to take him off the train. “Have you ever regretted what you did?”I asked eagerly behind him. With no hesitation, he answered my question in a low but clear voice. “Thats the best decision I have ever made.”Seeing him being taken away, my eyes were filled with tears unconsciously.

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聽完他的故事，我再也無法和他四目相對。他所說的讓我感到震驚，使得我無言以對。正當我不知所措的時候，他一直在等的人出現(xiàn)了，并開始把他抬下火車。“你有對你所做過的事感到后悔嗎？”我在他身后急切地問道。沒有片刻的猶豫，他用一種低沉而清晰的聲音回答我說，“那是我做過的最好的決定。”看著他被抬走得越來越遠，不知不覺間，我的眼中充滿了淚水。

得分點簡釋：

1. what he said ... 主語從句

2. completely 完全地 近義詞：totally ; thoroughly; entirely

3. make sb adj 使得某人 ... 樣

4. be at a loss 不知所措

5. had been doing sth 過去完成進行時 表示開始于過去某一時間，并一直持續(xù)到過去另一時間的動作

本文中火車進站等待來人接站(過去某一時間)，一直持續(xù)到來人出現(xiàn) (過去另一時間)，再例如：

When she came to herself, she found she had been lying on the floor.

當她蘇醒過來，她發(fā)現(xiàn)她一直躺在地板上。

(失去知覺是過去某一時間，一直持續(xù)到蘇醒過來的過去另一時間)

5.1 come to oneself 蘇醒

6. Have you ever done sth ? 你曾經(jīng)有沒有做過某事？

7. ... regretted what you did? 賓語從句

8. with no hesitation 沒有絲毫的猶豫

9. the best decision (that) I have ever made 定語從句，引導(dǎo)詞省略

10. see 賓語 being V過去分詞 看見賓語正在被 ... 例如：

I saw little Tom being punished by his father. 我看見小湯姆正在被他爸爸責罰。

11. be filled with ... 充滿 ... 近義短語：be full of

12. unconsciously 不知不覺地 December 4th, 2023

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