高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達11

　　湖北省武漢華中師范大學第一附屬中學2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題

　　【題文】

　　請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　Gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but the parent of all others.

　　注意：

　　①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;

　　④詞數為120左右。

　　【答案】

　　I would shudder at the thought of a world in which people have no gratitude for their country, society, family and those who helped them because gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but also cultivates all others.

　　Ideally, one inch of help deserves one mile of gratitude; if it is hard to be so for most ordinary people, at least one inch of help should be repaid by one inch of gratitude.

　　【解析】

　　【思路點撥】 本文主要從感激別人是美德入手，引出應如何感激別人。

　　2024高考真題英語（新課標I卷）

　　【題文】書面表達

　　假如你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意。請給該校寫一封信，詢問有關情況。（箭頭所指內容）

　　注意：1.詞數100左右

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文流暢。

　　參考詞匯：住宿—accommodation

　　山東省泰安市2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題

　　假設你是高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Sam來信詢問你目前如何進行高效復習的。請根據以下要點，結合自身實際寫封回信。

　　1．學習方面：科學規劃，提高效率；

　　2．生活方面：加強鍛煉，健康飲食；

　　3．其他……

　　注意：

　　1．詞數120—150左右；

　　2．開頭語和結尾語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

　　3．適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern．_________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern. In your letter, you asked me how to revise efficiently. As a student, it’s important for us to revise efficiently, which has a great influence on our achievements. As far as I am concerned, the following are all that I do in my study life.

　　To start with, you should have a revising plan, in which there must be the following aspects, what、when and how to revise. Next , you ought to keep in a good mood. Only when you feel happy can you learn efficiently and delightedly . Provided that you are upset now, do you want to study ? Thirdly, healthy body is a must.

　　There is no doubt that illnesses have a bad effect on our study. As a consequence , you’d better exercise regularly everyday so as to keep healthy. Last but not least, you must be strong-minded, since you you’ll find some questions difficult to deal with.

　　I’m more than glad to help you. And I hope these suggestions can give you some help.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　【技巧點撥】

　　主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；

　　一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；

　　恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；

　　注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。

　　書面表達（共25分）

　　作為一名高三學生，你或許經常跟你的父母就看電視問題鬧矛盾。你的父母以學業繁重和影響視力等為由阻撓你看電視，而你又認為電視能滿足你的興趣愛好同時繁重的學業下也需要放松，最后你們之間相互妥協達成了一致意見。請你以該話題寫一篇字數120左右的短文。

　　注意：1. 就雙方的理由可以進行適當的擴充，協議自己想象。

　　2. 開頭已寫好，不計入字數

　　I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.

　　【答案】I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.

　　My parents hold the opinion that I should study hard so that I will have more choices in the future. Besides,

　　they consider that it is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often, which is the chief cause of short sight. But in my view, it is TV that gives me what I am interested in. In addition, it may relax my mind when I am tired, in which case the efficiency of my study will be improved.

　　In the end we reached an agreement. Only at weekends am I allowed to watch TV, however, the programs are limited to news, sports and entertainment, not including TV plays. This agreement is acceptable to me for it is beneficial to my study and life.

　　江蘇省南京市、鹽城市2024屆高三第一次模擬考試英語試題請閱讀下面背景材料，并根據問題，用英語寫一篇作文向學校英文報投稿。

　　In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers 20 to Tmall.com and Taobao.com. In 2024, Tmall and Taobao together made 19. 1 billion in sales oil that dayHowever, in 2024, the shopping festival kicked off with an even sponger start-sales hit 100 million yuan 55 seconds alter midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business oil that day.

　　What does this material reflect? What is behind the phenomenon? And what are your comments and advice on it?

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數150左右。開頭己給出，不計入總詞數。

　　2. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

　　3. 參考詞犯：理性的rational

　　With the swift development of the Internet,__________________________________

　　___________________________.

　　【答案】

　　【參考范文】

　　With the swift development of the Internet, we can see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very convenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via their computers or telephones. Second, people shopping online have more choices of goods than those in real shops and area able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet account for higher sales online.

　　In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. But when we enjoy the convenience it brings us, we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, we had better stay national and just buy what we really need; otherwise, it would cause a waste of money and resources.

　　【解析】【寫作指導】

　　本文是材料作文，根據所給的材料，說明這種現象的潛在原因是什么，利弊是什么，你自己的觀點是什么。注意時態用的是一般現在時。恰當地使用連接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。

　　高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達11

　　湖北省武漢華中師范大學第一附屬中學2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題

　　【題文】

　　請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　Gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but the parent of all others.

　　注意：

　　①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；

　　②除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;

　　④詞數為120左右。

　　【答案】

　　I would shudder at the thought of a world in which people have no gratitude for their country, society, family and those who helped them because gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but also cultivates all others.

　　Ideally, one inch of help deserves one mile of gratitude; if it is hard to be so for most ordinary people, at least one inch of help should be repaid by one inch of gratitude.

　　【解析】

　　【思路點撥】 本文主要從感激別人是美德入手，引出應如何感激別人。

　　2024高考真題英語（新課標I卷）

　　【題文】書面表達

　　假如你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意。請給該校寫一封信，詢問有關情況。（箭頭所指內容）

　　注意：1.詞數100左右

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文流暢。

　　參考詞匯：住宿—accommodation

　　山東省泰安市2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題

　　假設你是高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Sam來信詢問你目前如何進行高效復習的。請根據以下要點，結合自身實際寫封回信。

　　1．學習方面：科學規劃，提高效率；

　　2．生活方面：加強鍛煉，健康飲食；

　　3．其他……

　　注意：

　　1．詞數120—150左右；

　　2．開頭語和結尾語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

　　3．適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern．_________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern. In your letter, you asked me how to revise efficiently. As a student, it’s important for us to revise efficiently, which has a great influence on our achievements. As far as I am concerned, the following are all that I do in my study life.

　　To start with, you should have a revising plan, in which there must be the following aspects, what、when and how to revise. Next , you ought to keep in a good mood. Only when you feel happy can you learn efficiently and delightedly . Provided that you are upset now, do you want to study ? Thirdly, healthy body is a must.

　　There is no doubt that illnesses have a bad effect on our study. As a consequence , you’d better exercise regularly everyday so as to keep healthy. Last but not least, you must be strong-minded, since you you’ll find some questions difficult to deal with.

　　I’m more than glad to help you. And I hope these suggestions can give you some help.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　【技巧點撥】

　　主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；

　　一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；

　　恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；

　　注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。

　　書面表達（共25分）

　　作為一名高三學生，你或許經常跟你的父母就看電視問題鬧矛盾。你的父母以學業繁重和影響視力等為由阻撓你看電視，而你又認為電視能滿足你的興趣愛好同時繁重的學業下也需要放松，最后你們之間相互妥協達成了一致意見。請你以該話題寫一篇字數120左右的短文。

　　注意：1. 就雙方的理由可以進行適當的擴充，協議自己想象。

　　2. 開頭已寫好，不計入字數

　　I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.

　　【答案】I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.

　　My parents hold the opinion that I should study hard so that I will have more choices in the future. Besides,

　　they consider that it is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often, which is the chief cause of short sight. But in my view, it is TV that gives me what I am interested in. In addition, it may relax my mind when I am tired, in which case the efficiency of my study will be improved.

　　In the end we reached an agreement. Only at weekends am I allowed to watch TV, however, the programs are limited to news, sports and entertainment, not including TV plays. This agreement is acceptable to me for it is beneficial to my study and life.

　　江蘇省南京市、鹽城市2024屆高三第一次模擬考試英語試題請閱讀下面背景材料，并根據問題，用英語寫一篇作文向學校英文報投稿。

　　In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers 20 to Tmall.com and Taobao.com. In 2024, Tmall and Taobao together made 19. 1 billion in sales oil that dayHowever, in 2024, the shopping festival kicked off with an even sponger start-sales hit 100 million yuan 55 seconds alter midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business oil that day.

　　What does this material reflect? What is behind the phenomenon? And what are your comments and advice on it?

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數150左右。開頭己給出，不計入總詞數。

　　2. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

　　3. 參考詞犯：理性的rational

　　With the swift development of the Internet,__________________________________

　　___________________________.

　　【答案】

　　【參考范文】

　　With the swift development of the Internet, we can see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very convenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via their computers or telephones. Second, people shopping online have more choices of goods than those in real shops and area able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet account for higher sales online.

　　In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. But when we enjoy the convenience it brings us, we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, we had better stay national and just buy what we really need; otherwise, it would cause a waste of money and resources.

　　【解析】【寫作指導】

　　本文是材料作文，根據所給的材料，說明這種現象的潛在原因是什么，利弊是什么，你自己的觀點是什么。注意時態用的是一般現在時。恰當地使用連接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。