河北省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練 短文改錯(cuò)+書面表達(dá)（76）
河北省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：
短文改錯(cuò)+書面表達(dá)（76）
短文改錯(cuò)
假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
書面表達(dá)
現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽音樂、學(xué)英語。你的英語筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來信中提到感覺頭痛、注意力不集中、汜憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)述過度使用耳機(jī)的現(xiàn)象；
2．分析過度使用耳機(jī)的危害；
3．提出你的建議。
注意：
1．要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．可能用到的詞匯：耳機(jī)earphone It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
got
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
and/so
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
used
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
easy
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
are
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
students
an
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead ∧plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
of
their
protect the environment.
One Possible Version
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Tao
河北省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：
短文改錯(cuò)+書面表達(dá)（76）
短文改錯(cuò)
假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
書面表達(dá)
現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽音樂、學(xué)英語。你的英語筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來信中提到感覺頭痛、注意力不集中、汜憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)述過度使用耳機(jī)的現(xiàn)象；
2．分析過度使用耳機(jī)的危害；
3．提出你的建議。
注意：
1．要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．可能用到的詞匯：耳機(jī)earphone It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
got
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
and/so
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
used
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
easy
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
are
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
students
an
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead ∧plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
of
their
protect the environment.
One Possible Version
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Tao
