一篇優(yōu)秀的SAT作文首先段落要清晰，一般分三到四段為好;其次字?jǐn)?shù)要適中，雖然SAT作文沒有字?jǐn)?shù)的限制，但四百左右為好，太短的文章不能夠說明問題;最后就是文章內(nèi)容要有論點(diǎn)有論據(jù)，例證要恰當(dāng)。下面就來看一篇優(yōu)秀的SAT作文，大家可以參考一下。

　　Do we need other people in order to understand ourselves?

　　Most parents and teachers tell students the extremely tired clich of the consequences of following the crowd. It is said that, in order to be a competely individual thinker, one must ignore what others say. Such advice is certainly true to some extent; unreasonable malice must be forgotten in order to keep some level of self-esteem. However, as with most ideas, this one can not be taken in absolute form. In at least some respects, we need other people in order to understand ourselves.

　　An excellent example of a literary character who could have psychologically benefitted from social interaction is J. Alfred Prufrock from T.S. Eliots poem The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock. In the poem, Prufrck desires a relationship with a woman very much, but he refrains from initiating conversation because he fears that he could not hold the interest of a sophisticated lady. Should Prufrock have taken the step to accept other people into his life, he most likely would have discovered, as the reader of the poem certainly did, that he is most articulate. Others would have impressed upon him the beauty of his words and his talent for prose. If Prufrock would have spoken his song a loud, the ladies surely would have shown him what he himself did not understand. Since the ladies would reveal Prufrocks talents to him, it is true that we need others in order to understand ourselves.

　　The lesson of learning from others opinions of yourself extends much farther than the song of a fictional character. Two days ago, in an art class, my group of students had assigned self portraits due. Most of us brought in photographs of ourselves. Nevertheless, one boy brought nothing and handed us all slips of paper. He told us to write a word to describe him, and when we had done so, he pasted the words on a poster. This must have been a revealing exercise for him because, upon the sight of such descriptions as bitter and sarcastic, he was shocked. In the case of this boy, he had not realized how his personality appeared to others. Though he might not have thought himself bitter, his friends comments certainly made him seem that way. The fact that we need others in order to understand ourselves is clearly shown by this boys revelation.

　　這篇SAT作文之所以可以作為我們優(yōu)秀作文的范例，就是因?yàn)樗旧献龅搅宋覀兾恼麻_頭所提到的幾點(diǎn)要求，在段落、字?jǐn)?shù)、內(nèi)容方面都做得比較到位，觀點(diǎn)明確、例證充分，大家不妨把它的例證部分摘抄出來，多進(jìn)行一些積累。

　　一篇優(yōu)秀的SAT作文首先段落要清晰，一般分三到四段為好;其次字?jǐn)?shù)要適中，雖然SAT作文沒有字?jǐn)?shù)的限制，但四百左右為好，太短的文章不能夠說明問題;最后就是文章內(nèi)容要有論點(diǎn)有論據(jù)，例證要恰當(dāng)。下面就來看一篇優(yōu)秀的SAT作文，大家可以參考一下。

　　Do we need other people in order to understand ourselves?

　　Most parents and teachers tell students the extremely tired clich of the consequences of following the crowd. It is said that, in order to be a competely individual thinker, one must ignore what others say. Such advice is certainly true to some extent; unreasonable malice must be forgotten in order to keep some level of self-esteem. However, as with most ideas, this one can not be taken in absolute form. In at least some respects, we need other people in order to understand ourselves.

　　An excellent example of a literary character who could have psychologically benefitted from social interaction is J. Alfred Prufrock from T.S. Eliots poem The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock. In the poem, Prufrck desires a relationship with a woman very much, but he refrains from initiating conversation because he fears that he could not hold the interest of a sophisticated lady. Should Prufrock have taken the step to accept other people into his life, he most likely would have discovered, as the reader of the poem certainly did, that he is most articulate. Others would have impressed upon him the beauty of his words and his talent for prose. If Prufrock would have spoken his song a loud, the ladies surely would have shown him what he himself did not understand. Since the ladies would reveal Prufrocks talents to him, it is true that we need others in order to understand ourselves.

　　The lesson of learning from others opinions of yourself extends much farther than the song of a fictional character. Two days ago, in an art class, my group of students had assigned self portraits due. Most of us brought in photographs of ourselves. Nevertheless, one boy brought nothing and handed us all slips of paper. He told us to write a word to describe him, and when we had done so, he pasted the words on a poster. This must have been a revealing exercise for him because, upon the sight of such descriptions as bitter and sarcastic, he was shocked. In the case of this boy, he had not realized how his personality appeared to others. Though he might not have thought himself bitter, his friends comments certainly made him seem that way. The fact that we need others in order to understand ourselves is clearly shown by this boys revelation.

　　這篇SAT作文之所以可以作為我們優(yōu)秀作文的范例，就是因?yàn)樗旧献龅搅宋覀兾恼麻_頭所提到的幾點(diǎn)要求，在段落、字?jǐn)?shù)、內(nèi)容方面都做得比較到位，觀點(diǎn)明確、例證充分，大家不妨把它的例證部分摘抄出來，多進(jìn)行一些積累。