高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達32

　　湖南省瀏陽一中、攸縣一中、醴陵一中2024屆高三聯考英語試題

　　【題文】

　　Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

　　伴隨我們成長，長輩們在不經意間老去。一曲《時間都去哪兒了》戳中了所有人的淚點，引起很多人的共鳴。相信你也會有些感觸。請以此為話題寫一篇短文：

　　內容：1. 你和一位長輩之間發生的一件事

　　2. 你的感觸和反思

　　注意：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域;

　　2.短文詞數120詞左右;

　　3.內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫;

　　4.書寫清晰、工整;

　　One possible version:

　　The song Where Has the Time Gone moved many people, which also brought me back to an unforgettable incident between my grandpa and me.

　　When I was 13, my parent worked in Guangdong Province and I was take care of by my grandpa. I got addicted to computer games because of loneliness and learning-weariness. My parents were disappointed and angry, forcing me to drop out. But Grandpa said no. He decided to accompany me to school and waited for me outside till the end of class everyday. Until one day he was seriously ill, I was touched and felt guilty.

　　He used his own way to get me back from the wrong way. Now he is getting older and older. I can’t afford to buy him expensive gifts now, but I can help him with the housework. What’s more, I am determined to work harder to make him feel proud of me in the future.

　　【解析】

　　【技巧點撥】

　　1.主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；

　　2.一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；

　　3.恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；

　　4.注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。

　　河南省北大附中河南分校2024屆高三沖刺英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）

　　假定你是李華，每當聽到“常回家看看”這首歌時，你都非常感動。向父母表達愛的方式

　　有很多種，請你根據以下要點，寫一篇演講稿號召同學們都要尊敬父母。

　　提示：1.經常幫助父母做一些力所能及的家務活；

　　2．經常關心父母的生活和身體健康狀況；

　　3．在父母生日時表達祝愿，讓他們知道我們的愛。

　　注意：1．詞數100左右；

　　2．可以適當發揮以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭和結尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　My dear fellows,

　　Today I'd like to talk about love to our parents.

　　Many people are moved by the song Going home often when they hear it ,including me.

　　Thank you!

　　【答案】

　　廣東省陽東一中、廣雅中學2024屆高三第一次聯考英語試題【題文】基礎寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)

　　中國民工學校狀況越來越受到人們的關注，假設你是李華，你和你的同學共同對你所在的城市的民工學校進行了調查。了解情況之后你寫信給英語周報，呼吁全社會關注民工學校，幫助民工子弟。

　　[寫作內容]：

　　民工學校的現狀 1、設施簡陋

　　2、師資缺乏

　　3、民工子弟熱愛學習

　　改善民工學校現狀的建議 政府方面：資金的投入

　　學生方面：...... （至少提兩個建議）

　　呼吁全社會的人關注民工學校

　　[寫作要求]

　　1、只能使用5個句子表達所有寫作內容，信的開頭與結尾已經給出，不計入句子個數。

　　2、文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　[參考詞匯]：民工學校：migrant schoolDear Editor，

　　Recently, my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city. Problems do exist.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Editor，

　　Recently, my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city. Problems do exist.

　　Owing to the lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers. However, we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us. In order to improve the situation, we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools. As for us, the local students, can help to collect money or donate books to them. We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids, because if everyone contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　廣東省湛江一中2024屆高三臨門一腳英語

　　【題文】讀寫任務 （共1小題，滿分25分）

　　閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　One night when my wife was preparing dinner, our little son took a piece of paper to her which read:

　　For washing the car---- $5.00

　　Playing with little sister---- $0.25

　　Getting a good report card----$5.00

　　For sweeping the common corridor--- $2.00

　　Total ---$12.25

　　His mother looked at him standing there expecting payment. She picked up the pen and turning the paper over, this is what she wrote：

　　For 10 months I carried you---- No charge

　　For the toys, food and clothes ---- No charge

　　The full cost of my love ---- No charge

　　When he finished reading, he had big tears in his eyes. He looked at his mother and said, “Mummy, I love you!” Then he took the pen and in great big letters wrote on the “bill”: “All paid.”

　　【寫作內容】

　　1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

　　2. 以約120詞，以 “母愛” 談談你的想法，內容包括：

　　(1) 讀完故事后你的感受；

　　(2) 記一件有關母愛的感人事件；

　　(3) 你對母愛的看法。

　　【寫作要求】

　　1．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不能直接

　　引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　【評分標準】

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

　　【答案】任務寫作

　　Possible version

　　The writer’s son asked payment from his mum for the things he did. After reading what his mum wrote on the paper, the son realized her unconditional and priceless love, moved to tears.

　　After reading the story, I am also moved by the Mum’s selfless and priceless love for her son. Without saying the word “love”, the mother did what she could to express her deep love to her son. And her love gave her son a second life!

　　Talking of a mum’s love for her kid, I have never forgotten a story which touches me deeply in heart. A little boy had a serious disease. After a long time treatment, it seemed that doctors could do nothing to save him. He was frightened and became desperate, crying all day long. But his mother didn’t give up but consistently comforted him with loving, encouraging words and tender care. The boy gradually calmed down, then perseveringly fighting against the illness bravely, and eventually survived. It was his mum’s love for him that helped the boy conquer the great challenge in his life.

　　For me, Mum, a word that means the world to everyone, is the warmest word in their heart. Nothing can express more. A mother’s love is like a circle, which has no beginning and ending. It keeps going around and around, ever expanding and touching everyone who comes in touch with it. The circle surrounds them like the morning’s mist, warming them like the noontime sun, and covering them like a blanket of evening stars. Thus, remember her unconditional love and never forget to love her more than ever.

　　江西五校（江西師大附中、臨川一中、鷹潭一中、宜春中學、新余四中）2024屆高三第一次聯考 英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）One possible student version:

　　Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, Li, monitor of our class, is an example. He distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.

　　When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. Li always has a strictly-followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentively and takes notes in class, keeping close pace with the teacher. After class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.

　　From Li we can learn that a student’s good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. Good habits are very important. We may benefit from them or suffer from the absence of them.

　　高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達32

　　湖南省瀏陽一中、攸縣一中、醴陵一中2024屆高三聯考英語試題

　　【題文】

　　Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

　　伴隨我們成長，長輩們在不經意間老去。一曲《時間都去哪兒了》戳中了所有人的淚點，引起很多人的共鳴。相信你也會有些感觸。請以此為話題寫一篇短文：

　　內容：1. 你和一位長輩之間發生的一件事

　　2. 你的感觸和反思

　　注意：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域;

　　2.短文詞數120詞左右;

　　3.內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫;

　　4.書寫清晰、工整;

　　One possible version:

　　The song Where Has the Time Gone moved many people, which also brought me back to an unforgettable incident between my grandpa and me.

　　When I was 13, my parent worked in Guangdong Province and I was take care of by my grandpa. I got addicted to computer games because of loneliness and learning-weariness. My parents were disappointed and angry, forcing me to drop out. But Grandpa said no. He decided to accompany me to school and waited for me outside till the end of class everyday. Until one day he was seriously ill, I was touched and felt guilty.

　　He used his own way to get me back from the wrong way. Now he is getting older and older. I can’t afford to buy him expensive gifts now, but I can help him with the housework. What’s more, I am determined to work harder to make him feel proud of me in the future.

　　【解析】

　　【技巧點撥】

　　1.主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；

　　2.一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；

　　3.恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；

　　4.注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。

　　河南省北大附中河南分校2024屆高三沖刺英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）

　　假定你是李華，每當聽到“常回家看看”這首歌時，你都非常感動。向父母表達愛的方式

　　有很多種，請你根據以下要點，寫一篇演講稿號召同學們都要尊敬父母。

　　提示：1.經常幫助父母做一些力所能及的家務活；

　　2．經常關心父母的生活和身體健康狀況；

　　3．在父母生日時表達祝愿，讓他們知道我們的愛。

　　注意：1．詞數100左右；

　　2．可以適當發揮以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭和結尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　My dear fellows,

　　Today I'd like to talk about love to our parents.

　　Many people are moved by the song Going home often when they hear it ,including me.

　　Thank you!

　　【答案】

　　廣東省陽東一中、廣雅中學2024屆高三第一次聯考英語試題【題文】基礎寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)

　　中國民工學校狀況越來越受到人們的關注，假設你是李華，你和你的同學共同對你所在的城市的民工學校進行了調查。了解情況之后你寫信給英語周報，呼吁全社會關注民工學校，幫助民工子弟。

　　[寫作內容]：

　　民工學校的現狀 1、設施簡陋

　　2、師資缺乏

　　3、民工子弟熱愛學習

　　改善民工學校現狀的建議 政府方面：資金的投入

　　學生方面：...... （至少提兩個建議）

　　呼吁全社會的人關注民工學校

　　[寫作要求]

　　1、只能使用5個句子表達所有寫作內容，信的開頭與結尾已經給出，不計入句子個數。

　　2、文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　[參考詞匯]：民工學校：migrant schoolDear Editor，

　　Recently, my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city. Problems do exist.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Editor，

　　Recently, my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city. Problems do exist.

　　Owing to the lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers. However, we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us. In order to improve the situation, we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools. As for us, the local students, can help to collect money or donate books to them. We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids, because if everyone contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　廣東省湛江一中2024屆高三臨門一腳英語

　　【題文】讀寫任務 （共1小題，滿分25分）

　　閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　One night when my wife was preparing dinner, our little son took a piece of paper to her which read:

　　For washing the car---- $5.00

　　Playing with little sister---- $0.25

　　Getting a good report card----$5.00

　　For sweeping the common corridor--- $2.00

　　Total ---$12.25

　　His mother looked at him standing there expecting payment. She picked up the pen and turning the paper over, this is what she wrote：

　　For 10 months I carried you---- No charge

　　For the toys, food and clothes ---- No charge

　　The full cost of my love ---- No charge

　　When he finished reading, he had big tears in his eyes. He looked at his mother and said, “Mummy, I love you!” Then he took the pen and in great big letters wrote on the “bill”: “All paid.”

　　【寫作內容】

　　1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

　　2. 以約120詞，以 “母愛” 談談你的想法，內容包括：

　　(1) 讀完故事后你的感受；

　　(2) 記一件有關母愛的感人事件；

　　(3) 你對母愛的看法。

　　【寫作要求】

　　1．作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不能直接

　　引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　【評分標準】

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

　　【答案】任務寫作

　　Possible version

　　The writer’s son asked payment from his mum for the things he did. After reading what his mum wrote on the paper, the son realized her unconditional and priceless love, moved to tears.

　　After reading the story, I am also moved by the Mum’s selfless and priceless love for her son. Without saying the word “love”, the mother did what she could to express her deep love to her son. And her love gave her son a second life!

　　Talking of a mum’s love for her kid, I have never forgotten a story which touches me deeply in heart. A little boy had a serious disease. After a long time treatment, it seemed that doctors could do nothing to save him. He was frightened and became desperate, crying all day long. But his mother didn’t give up but consistently comforted him with loving, encouraging words and tender care. The boy gradually calmed down, then perseveringly fighting against the illness bravely, and eventually survived. It was his mum’s love for him that helped the boy conquer the great challenge in his life.

　　For me, Mum, a word that means the world to everyone, is the warmest word in their heart. Nothing can express more. A mother’s love is like a circle, which has no beginning and ending. It keeps going around and around, ever expanding and touching everyone who comes in touch with it. The circle surrounds them like the morning’s mist, warming them like the noontime sun, and covering them like a blanket of evening stars. Thus, remember her unconditional love and never forget to love her more than ever.

　　江西五校（江西師大附中、臨川一中、鷹潭一中、宜春中學、新余四中）2024屆高三第一次聯考 英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）One possible student version:

　　Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, Li, monitor of our class, is an example. He distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.

　　When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. Li always has a strictly-followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentively and takes notes in class, keeping close pace with the teacher. After class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.

　　From Li we can learn that a student’s good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. Good habits are very important. We may benefit from them or suffer from the absence of them.