2024年高考英語高效書面表達專題卷:25(含解析)
1.
來自你市的中學生小記者最近進行了一次采訪活動。請根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容為你校的英語園地寫一篇報道。
時間 2007年1月15日
地點 經(jīng)濟開發(fā)區(qū)
采訪人 40名中學小記者
被采訪人 開發(fā)區(qū)主任王慶海
采訪內(nèi)容 過去一年的成績
如何吸引投資
三年后開發(fā)區(qū)的前景
其他 1.除了筆、本,還用了數(shù)碼相機、錄音筆等現(xiàn)代設備
2.對一流的設計、漂亮的綠化、現(xiàn)代的建筑留下了深刻的印象
:經(jīng)濟開發(fā)區(qū)the Economic Development Zone;小記者teenage report;投資investment;數(shù)碼digital;錄音筆recording pen;
2.書面表達(滿分2分)
暑假來臨。你班同學討論了假期的計劃,提出了不同的看法。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關討論的英語短文,并談談你的看法。
優(yōu)點 缺點
待在家中 花費少;方便舒適 不能親身了解外界
外出旅游 增長見識;開闊眼界 花費多;旅途不便;擔心安全
假如你叫李華,最近收到好朋友Mike的來信,得知他染上了吸煙的習慣,你很為他擔心。請給他寫一封信。
1.表明自己的看法; 2.談談吸煙的危害(可舉例說明); 3.提出至少兩條建議。
注意:
1、短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2、短文詞數(shù)不少于100。
3、內(nèi)容充實,結構完整,語意連貫。
4、書寫需清晰、工整。
5、首句已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking,
4.假如你是李明,你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學每次遇到重要考試,都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信,向某學生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應包括下列要點:?
?焦慮癥狀: 頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等
?建?議:
1.考前制定好合適的復習計劃
?
2.考試期間正常作息?
?
3.睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠
?其他建議:
(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定2點)?
?注意:
1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯,清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思;
3.?詞數(shù):100個左右。開頭已給出,不計詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:頭暈—dizzy(adj.)??
Dear?editor,??
? I’m?Li?Ming?of?Senior?Three,?Guangming?Middle?School.?I’m?writing?to?tell?you?about?some?
symptoms?of?anxiety?among?us?students?before?exams.?__________________________________?
?_______________________________________________________________________________?
?_____________________________________________________________________________?
Li?Ming? ??
5.假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Helen正在寫一關各國中學生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報告。她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,想了解相關情況。請你根據(jù)以下提示,給她回一封電子郵件。
2.原因分析;
3.你的看法。
注意: 1.根據(jù)所給提示,適當發(fā)揮, 要求內(nèi)容充實,語意連貫。
3.郵件中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. ______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
參考答案
1.
Forty teenage reporters from different middle schools in our city paid a visit to the Economic Development Zone and had an interview with Wang Qinghai, head of the Zone, on January 15th, 2007.
At the interview, the reporters asked Mr Wang about what achievements they made last year, how they were to attract more investment and how the zone would be developing over the next three years. Mr Wang gave them satisfactory answers.
They used modern equipment, such as digital cameras and recording pens besides pens and note-books at the interview. They were deeply impressed by the first-class design of the zone, as well as beautiful trees and grass and modern buildings there.
【解析】
2.不唯一
Possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.
【解析】
試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,暑假來臨。你班同學討論了假期的計劃,提出了不同的看法。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關討論的英語短文,并談談你的看法。需要的內(nèi)容已經(jīng),但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實,要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點都需要包括,缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.
You see, not only does smoking waste your money and time, but it is harmful to your health physically and mentally. As a high school student, you should study hard and stop smoking immediately. Although it is hard to get rid of smoking, I hope you will follow my advice.
First, choose a day when you feel relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits to remind yourself when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Hu
【解析】
試題分析:本文是一篇應用文,首先表明自己對這件事的看法,可從金錢、時間及其健康方面進行闡述吸煙的危害,再舉例對其進行說明,寫作中注意使用平時積累的“起承轉合”的連詞,使用萬能句型造句,最后提出自己的建議。提建議時可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分開闡述,以顯得層次分明。
4.
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.?
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
【解析】
試題分析:本文的屬于提綱類寫作,是關于考試焦慮癥的相關內(nèi)容,話題切合考生實際,與考生的生活非常貼近,考生有話可說,有很強的可寫性。要點是以提綱的形式給出的,要求考生有較強的整合能力,在寫作時充分利用連接詞,高級句型和詞匯,如果可能在文章結尾運用諺語,以使文章的層次更高。首先應該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫清楚,在發(fā)表個人建議的時候,可以適當使用高級的句式和高級的詞匯來給文章增色。在自己的個人建議中可以加入諺語,讓文章更上一層樓。
【亮點說明】范文使用了很多詞組:suffer from 遭受,lack of缺乏,be eager to 渴望,get rid of消除,getting along with相處, in my opinion在我看來, stay up熬夜,還使用了不少精典句式,如:Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 這句話用了it做形式主語, there is no need to worry too much about the results.這句話用了固定句型, We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 這句話用了省略句, (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 這句話用了結果狀語從句,還有文章還使用了First of all, Besides,這樣的關聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. I’m sorry to say that most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.
I think the reasons behind that are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
試題分析:考查半開放性作文寫作。是關于中學生課外閱讀情況在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象,進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法,增添了寫作的靈活性,同時能較好地考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力
1.
來自你市的中學生小記者最近進行了一次采訪活動。請根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容為你校的英語園地寫一篇報道。
時間 2007年1月15日
地點 經(jīng)濟開發(fā)區(qū)
采訪人 40名中學小記者
被采訪人 開發(fā)區(qū)主任王慶海
采訪內(nèi)容 過去一年的成績
如何吸引投資
三年后開發(fā)區(qū)的前景
其他 1.除了筆、本,還用了數(shù)碼相機、錄音筆等現(xiàn)代設備
2.對一流的設計、漂亮的綠化、現(xiàn)代的建筑留下了深刻的印象
:經(jīng)濟開發(fā)區(qū)the Economic Development Zone;小記者teenage report;投資investment;數(shù)碼digital;錄音筆recording pen;
2.書面表達(滿分2分)
暑假來臨。你班同學討論了假期的計劃,提出了不同的看法。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關討論的英語短文,并談談你的看法。
優(yōu)點 缺點
待在家中 花費少;方便舒適 不能親身了解外界
外出旅游 增長見識;開闊眼界 花費多;旅途不便;擔心安全
假如你叫李華,最近收到好朋友Mike的來信,得知他染上了吸煙的習慣,你很為他擔心。請給他寫一封信。
1.表明自己的看法; 2.談談吸煙的危害(可舉例說明); 3.提出至少兩條建議。
注意:
1、短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2、短文詞數(shù)不少于100。
3、內(nèi)容充實,結構完整,語意連貫。
4、書寫需清晰、工整。
5、首句已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking,
4.假如你是李明,你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學每次遇到重要考試,都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信,向某學生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應包括下列要點:?
?焦慮癥狀: 頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等
?建?議:
1.考前制定好合適的復習計劃
?
2.考試期間正常作息?
?
3.睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠
?其他建議:
(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定2點)?
?注意:
1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯,清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思;
3.?詞數(shù):100個左右。開頭已給出,不計詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:頭暈—dizzy(adj.)??
Dear?editor,??
? I’m?Li?Ming?of?Senior?Three,?Guangming?Middle?School.?I’m?writing?to?tell?you?about?some?
symptoms?of?anxiety?among?us?students?before?exams.?__________________________________?
?_______________________________________________________________________________?
?_____________________________________________________________________________?
Li?Ming? ??
5.假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Helen正在寫一關各國中學生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報告。她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,想了解相關情況。請你根據(jù)以下提示,給她回一封電子郵件。
2.原因分析;
3.你的看法。
注意: 1.根據(jù)所給提示,適當發(fā)揮, 要求內(nèi)容充實,語意連貫。
3.郵件中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. ______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
參考答案
1.
Forty teenage reporters from different middle schools in our city paid a visit to the Economic Development Zone and had an interview with Wang Qinghai, head of the Zone, on January 15th, 2007.
At the interview, the reporters asked Mr Wang about what achievements they made last year, how they were to attract more investment and how the zone would be developing over the next three years. Mr Wang gave them satisfactory answers.
They used modern equipment, such as digital cameras and recording pens besides pens and note-books at the interview. They were deeply impressed by the first-class design of the zone, as well as beautiful trees and grass and modern buildings there.
【解析】
2.不唯一
Possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.
【解析】
試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,暑假來臨。你班同學討論了假期的計劃,提出了不同的看法。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關討論的英語短文,并談談你的看法。需要的內(nèi)容已經(jīng),但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實,要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點都需要包括,缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.
You see, not only does smoking waste your money and time, but it is harmful to your health physically and mentally. As a high school student, you should study hard and stop smoking immediately. Although it is hard to get rid of smoking, I hope you will follow my advice.
First, choose a day when you feel relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits to remind yourself when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Hu
【解析】
試題分析:本文是一篇應用文,首先表明自己對這件事的看法,可從金錢、時間及其健康方面進行闡述吸煙的危害,再舉例對其進行說明,寫作中注意使用平時積累的“起承轉合”的連詞,使用萬能句型造句,最后提出自己的建議。提建議時可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分開闡述,以顯得層次分明。
4.
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.?
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
【解析】
試題分析:本文的屬于提綱類寫作,是關于考試焦慮癥的相關內(nèi)容,話題切合考生實際,與考生的生活非常貼近,考生有話可說,有很強的可寫性。要點是以提綱的形式給出的,要求考生有較強的整合能力,在寫作時充分利用連接詞,高級句型和詞匯,如果可能在文章結尾運用諺語,以使文章的層次更高。首先應該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫清楚,在發(fā)表個人建議的時候,可以適當使用高級的句式和高級的詞匯來給文章增色。在自己的個人建議中可以加入諺語,讓文章更上一層樓。
【亮點說明】范文使用了很多詞組:suffer from 遭受,lack of缺乏,be eager to 渴望,get rid of消除,getting along with相處, in my opinion在我看來, stay up熬夜,還使用了不少精典句式,如:Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. 這句話用了it做形式主語, there is no need to worry too much about the results.這句話用了固定句型, We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. 這句話用了省略句, (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.) 這句話用了結果狀語從句,還有文章還使用了First of all, Besides,這樣的關聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. I’m sorry to say that most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.
I think the reasons behind that are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
試題分析:考查半開放性作文寫作。是關于中學生課外閱讀情況在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象,進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法,增添了寫作的靈活性,同時能較好地考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力