2024屆高考英語二輪復習微專題強化課件：7 書面表達 2 圖表式作文

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　　核心考點對應演練走向高考 · 英語第一部分微專題強化練七　書面表達第一部分 2　圖表式作文考向分析考題引路強化訓練 2 3 1 易錯防范 4 考向分析年份體裁話題命題形式命題趨勢 2024卷Ⅰ 書信暑假赴英學習，向學校詢問情況圖表式圖表式作文也是重要命題形式。考題引路 Writing 1 (2024·課標全國Ⅰ) 假定你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關情況(箭頭所指內容)。注意：1.詞數 100 左右。 2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。 3. 參考詞匯：住宿－accommodation __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點撥：項目內容確定體裁書信類應用文確定結構寫信原因→詳細內容→表達期望

　　確定要點文章內容是李華計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語，看到廣告后感覺里面有一些問題不太清楚，想要給校方寫信咨詢有關事項。提示部分給出了基本的信息，如六周課程及課程內容，而在信中考生要重點詢問課程開始的時間、班級規模的大小、每周課時數、教學費和住宿費情況等。在具體的布局謀篇中，首先要點明寫信的目的，然后提出需要咨詢的問題?？梢圆捎孟铝薪Y構： ①I'm writing to... I plan to... ②I'd like to know something more about... First... Second... Besides... ③I am looking forward to your early reply. 確定時態一般現在時為主，兼有將來時確定人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主答案： Dear Sir/Madam， I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I've seen your ad，and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides，I wish there would not be many students in a class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully Li Hua Writing 2 (2024·北京) 假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班的學生李華，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，為校刊“英語園地”寫一篇短文，記述你和同學們向學校提建議，解決自行車存放問題的過程。注意：1.詞數不少于60。 2．短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點撥：這篇情景作文主要涉及四個要點。在寫作時要以時間為主線，事件為輔助，寫清事件的過程。項目內容 “三定” 體裁：記敘文　時態：一般過去時　人稱：第一人稱為主確定要點 ①點明問題(There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. ) ②討論問題(My classmates and I had a discussion and...) ③提交建議(We went to meet the schoolmaster to report it. ) ④看到變化(He accepted our suggestions. Now it's easy to park our bikes.) 答案： There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our suggestions.Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened for us to the parking place.Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there. 強化訓練易錯防范要點殘缺，一盤散沙作為社區的志愿者，你與同班的幾名同學每隔一周的星期六就會到學校附近的兒童福利院，為暫時無法回家的兒童做一些力所能及的事情。請根據提示及圖畫內容為學校的墻報寫一篇報道。

　　注意：詞數100左右。參考詞匯：兒童福利院 children's home 錯因分析：寫這篇看圖作文時，考生沒有仔細觀察圖畫中的細節，忽視了第一幅圖畫中的“鐘表”指的是兩點而第四幅圖畫中“鐘表”指的是四點這個細節。另外，考生容易忽略第二、三幅圖畫中的一些活動等。由于這四幅圖畫是一個連環畫，敘述的是事情的整個過程，所以應當使用恰當的過渡詞語進行銜接。如果要點殘缺或者語句之間缺乏必要的過渡性詞語，整篇文章便顯得雜亂無章。答案： As volunteers in the neighborhood, my classmates and I visit a nearby children's home every other Saturday.We usually get there at 2：00 p.m.and leave two hours later.At the children's home, some of us help to do some cleaning and collect waste there to make everything tidy.And some of us chat with the children or read newspapers for them. A few of us play games with the children to make them happy and forget their troubles. During our stay there, we all try our best to let them know they are taken good care of by society, and we hope they will return home happily as soon as possible. 解析：看圖作文高分策略 1．審題定調無偏差。看圖作文依據內容可能會讓考生寫記敘文、說明文或者議論文(漫畫)。它們的時態和人稱也有所不同。 2．寫好開頭是前提。考生可以采用“總—分—總”結構進行寫作，開始直接點明文章主題，能夠達到出奇制勝的效果。如：April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.( 2009·北京卷) 3．要點齊全是保證。高考書面表達要點一般為4－6個，7－8句話。因此找準要點可以確保文章起碼的得分檔次。 4．句式多變升檔次。除了簡單句之外，考生還應嘗試運用倒裝句、復合句、省略句以及非謂語動詞等，提升文章檔次。注意：在高考寫作中“要點齊全”是高考評分標準的基本要求之一。所以，在寫作中切忌遺漏內容要點，四幅圖畫中人物的活動、到什么地方去、干了些什么、持續了多長時間，在行文中都要交代清楚。要做到表達清晰、意思連貫，考生就不能忽視語句之間的連接詞的作用。提醒一點，在文章的最后要注意表達自己的感想。核心考點對應演練

　　I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully Li Hua Writing 2 (2024·北京) 假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班的學生李華，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，為?？坝⒄Z園地”寫一篇短文，記述你和同學們向學校提建議，解決自行車存放問題的過程。注意：1.詞數不少于60。 2．短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意與點撥：這篇情景作文主要涉及四個要點。在寫作時要以時間為主線，事件為輔助，寫清事件的過程。項目內容 “三定” 體裁：記敘文　時態：一般過去時　人稱：第一人稱為主確定要點 ①點明問題(There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. ) ②討論問題(My classmates and I had a discussion and...) ③提交建議(We went to meet the schoolmaster to report it. ) ④看到變化(He accepted our suggestions. Now it's easy to park our bikes.) 答案： There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our suggestions.Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened for us to the parking place.Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there. 強化訓練易錯防范要點殘缺，一盤散沙作為社區的志愿者，你與同班的幾名同學每隔一周的星期六就會到學校附近的兒童福利院，為暫時無法回家的兒童做一些力所能及的事情。請根據提示及圖畫內容為學校的墻報寫一篇報道。