2024屆高考英語二輪復習熱點限時訓練：短文改錯系列4

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　　短文改錯系列4

　　一、短文改錯

　　1．下文中共有10處錯誤每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：

　　1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

　　Mr Wang is over seventy years old. He has retired（退休）.He is one of my respected teachers. He

　　teaches us??chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he?????taught us good. He

　　tried his best to make his classes lively.???Mr ang usually made good preparations for the lesson

　　and was strict?to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework, she would ask us to

　　correct them. At that time, I was??poorly in chemistry. Mr Wang often helped me with my

　　studies??very patiently. With his help, I have made a rapid progress and???caught with the class. He

　　is always very kind to every student.?As an experiencing teacher, he is respected and loved by

　　all??the students.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】Teaches-taught

　　【小題2】and-but

　　【小題3】good –well

　　【小題4】lesson-lessons

　　【小題5】to-with

　　【小題6】she-he

　　【小題7】poorly-poor

　　【小題8】(a) rapid

　　【小題9】catch /up with

　　【小題10】experiencing-experienced

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】這一句是過去時，表示過去發生的事情。

　　【小題2】上下文存在著轉折關系。

　　【小題3】副詞修飾動詞短語。

　　【小題4】這里是指他所上之課，應該是復數形式。

　　【小題5】固定短語be strict with sb對某人要求嚴格。

　　【小題6】上文可知這是一個男老師。

　　【小題7】be poor in…在…方面不擅長。

　　【小題8】progress是不可數名詞，不要加a。

　　【小題9】固定詞組catch u with追上。

　　【小題10】形容詞experienced

　　有經驗的。

　　2．對標有題號的每一行判斷并改正其中的錯誤：如果該行無誤，在該行相應右邊橫線上畫“√”；如果有誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，請按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一詞:把多余的詞用斜線劃掉（）,在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號，并在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　I am very excit to have received an e-mail from 76.

　　you. I’m glad you have made such a great progress 77.

　　that you can write your e-mail good Chinese. I read 78.

　　your e-mail to my parents but showed them the photo you 79.

　　sent it to me .How time flies! Our friendship has lasted 80.

　　for several month .We have got to know and learned a 81.

　　lot from each other . Yes, it is clearly that your life in82.

　　your country is quite different from me . Thanks again 83.

　　for writing to me. I’m looking forward to hear from 84.

　　you soon. Best wishes to you and your family.

　　85.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】exciting改成 excited

　　【小題2】去掉a

　　【小題3】e-mail后面加in

　　【小題4】but改成and

　　【小題5】去掉it

　　【小題6】month用復數

　　【小題7】clear改成clearly

　　【小題8】me改成mine

　　【小題9】hear改成hearing

　　【小題10】對的

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】修飾人使用excited。

　　【小題2】progress是不可數名詞，不能用a修飾。

　　【小題3】in表示用某種語言。

　　【小題4】上下文是并列關系。

　　【小題5】考察定語從句中做賓語的關系代詞的省略。

　　【小題6】month是可數名詞，根據上文的several可知這里使用復數形式。

　　【小題7】形容詞作表語。

　　【小題8】名詞性物主代詞mine=my country.

　　【小題9】to是介詞，后面接動名詞。

　　【小題10】

　　3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.

　　I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】usually改為usual

　　【小題2】while改成when

　　【小題3】hear改成heard

　　【小題4】happened改成happening

　　【小題5】shocking改成shocked

　　【小題6】peoples改成people

　　【小題7】去掉had

　　【小題8】but改成and

　　【小題9】his改成my

　　【小題10】proud后面加of

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】固定詞組as usual和往常一樣

　　【小題2】固定句型：be doing sth when…正在做某事…在這時

　　【小題3】全文是過去時

　　【小題4】happen沒有被動語態，這里是指正在發生的事情

　　【小題5】主語是人，用shocked修飾

　　【小題6】（people單獨使用指人們）

　　【小題7】這里沒有過去的過的時間狀語，不用過去完成時

　　【小題8】上下文沒有轉折的關系

　　【小題9】上下文串聯可知，是我很欣慰

　　【小題10】固定詞組be proud of

　　4．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（／）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　Mrs．Brown was an old lady with just one son who lived far 71．

　　away from her. On her 80th birthday, she was sure that even if 72．

　　her daughter could not come for a visit, but she would at least 73．

　　receive a present to her daughter．After all, eighty was a special

　　74．

　　birthday, one should not be forgotten．The old lady waited so 75．

　　eager that she stood at the front door for a whole day．Her 76．

　　daughter didn't show up．However, the old lady got the parcel 77．

　　in which there were a printed card along with a cheque．She 78．

　　felt very disappointed and she tears the cheque into pieces． 79．

　　Everyone but a caring daughter or son could write a cheque． 80．

　　【小題1】son →daughter

　　【小題2】對的

　　【小題3】去掉but

　　【小題4】to→from

　　【小題5】one→which/one 后家that

　　【小題6】eager

　　→eagerly

　　【小題7】parcel前the→a

　　【小題8】were→ was

　　【小題9】tea r→tore

　　【小題10】Everyone→Anyone

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】根據下文的she，可只是女兒。

　　【小題2】對的

　　【小題3】已經有even if引導了從句，就不能再用but連接。

　　【小題4】從她的女兒哪里收到一個禮物。

　　【小題5】逗號不能連接兩個句子，故用which引導定語從句，或在one后面that。

　　【小題6】修飾waited應用副詞。

　　【小題7】因為前面沒有提到過這個包裹，故用a。

　　【小題8】there be句式的謂語動詞應根據后面靠近他的主語來定，故用單數。

　　【小題9】根據前面的felt，可知這里應是tore.

　　【小題10】Anyone but除了…任何人

　　5．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and

　　81._________

　　rented for a car. Unfortunately, I had an accident and

　　82._________

　　hit another cars and I needed to stay in a hospital

　　83._________

　　for at least two weeks. I called my parents, so I did not

　　84._________

　　tell them what had happened. I knew that they will

　　85._________

　　be worried about myself because I was so far

　　86._________

　　away, and that my mother would not sleep until she

　　87._________

　　knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and

　　88._________

　　how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody

　　89._________

　　knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

　　90._________

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】before---ago

　　【小題2】去掉for

　　cars---car

　　【小題4】so---but

　　【小題5】will---would

　　【小題6】myself---me

　　【小題7】until---if

　　【小題8】interested---interesting

　　【小題9】正確

　　knew 后加the

　　【小題1】兩年前應是two years ago.因為后面的時態為過去時。

　　【小題2】rent為及物動詞，故去掉for。

　　【小題3】不可能同時撞上幾輛車，故用car。

　　【小題4】他雖然打電話了，但沒有告知父母車禍的事情。

　　【小題5】主句為過去時，賓語從句為過去某種時態。

　　【小題6】我知道他們會當心我，所以是賓格。

　　【小題7】如果她知道我的母親將會睡不著。

　　【小題8】有趣的故事interesting stories.

　　【小題9】正確。

　　【小題10】the truth真相只有一個，故需加the。

　　6．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】buy改成 buying

　　【小題2】here改成 there

　　【小題3】for后面加a

　　【小題4】but改成 and

　　【小題5】去掉around

　　【小題6】on改成in

　　【小題7】was改成 were

　　【小題8】luggages. 改成 luggage

　　【小題9】friend 改成friend’ s

　　【小題10】feel改成 felt

　　【解析】