2024年高考英語考前沖刺：書面表達考點鎖定及命題預測
2024年高考英語考前沖刺書面表達考點鎖定及命題預測
一、2024高考英語書面表達預測
（2024年5月12日）
高考英語寫作，即根據提示進行書面表達，有效的組織自己的思想，自己的邏輯，正確地運用語文載體，連貫地傳遞信息，表達意思，有效運用所學語言知識。高考英語書面表達是英語考試的重頭戲之一，而且非常適合考前集中突破。高考英語作文題目的命題歷來是“情理之中，意料之外”。“情理之中”即高考英語寫作皆是“學生話題、現實生活、熱點焦點話題”；“意料之外”則指高考英語作文題目經常與考生直接關心的社會熱點話題無直接聯系，但仔細琢磨，又會發現一些聯系，就是說“熱點歸熱點，關鍵找角度”。注意：1）要把原文的內容表達的清楚，順暢2） 字數一定要達到要求3）符合出題者的要求4）復合句、高級詞匯的使用。
要求考生必須把以下范文背誦并默寫過，高考時則可根據實際進行套用，大腦提取信息，信手拈來高分！
預測一：
當前，“酒后駕車”（drinking and driving）成了人們熱議的話題。請你根據以下提示，針對“酒后駕車”談談個人看法： 1．“酒后駕車”的危害。如：引發交通事故，造成交通阻塞，威脅生命安全， 造成財產損失等。 2．你的建議。 注意：1．詞數100左右； 2．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。 Nowadays,drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China.Here,I’d like to air my views about it.
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Nowadays,drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China.Here,I’d like to air my views about it.As is known to us all,drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people,including the driver himself.Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams,injuries and even deaths.Besides,a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars.I strongly suggest effective measures be taken before things get worse.Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drinking and driving.Meanwhile,the public,especially drivers,should be more aware of public safety.I hope by doing so,drinking and driving can be things of past.
預測二：
（一）
人情冷暖，何至于此？10月13日下午5時30分許，一出慘劇 (tragedy) 發生在廣東佛山：年僅兩歲的女童小悅悅先后三次被車碾過。而讓人難以理解的是，七分鐘內從女童身邊經過的十八個路人，竟然對此不聞不問。最后，一位撿垃圾的阿姨把小悅悅抱到路邊并找到她的媽媽。經醫院搶救無效，最終離世。根據這則資訊，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，對司機和路人的冷漠（indifference）加以簡要的評論。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。Recently, a tragedy happened in Foshan, Guangdong Province. A two-year-old girl was run over by two buses for three times and the two drivers left directly.
【參考范文】Recently, a tragedy happened in Foshan, Guangdong Province. A two-year-old girl was run over by two buses for three times and the two drivers left directly. What’s worse, while the girl was lying in the street bleeding and crying in pain, 18 people passed by but nobody stopped to do anything to save the girl. At the news, I think both the drivers and those passers by are to blame for their selfishness and indifference, whatever reasons they can give. In life, every one can meet trouble and need help, in which case all the other people should spare no efforts. So, here, I just call on the whole society to love and help each other.If we cannot defeat indifference, perhaps, one day, we will get ourselves killed by it.
（二）
假設你叫李華，是校報通訊員。上周三你班召開了一次班會，會上重點討論“老人摔倒要不要扶起”這一話題，原因是近幾年發生過多起因扶起摔倒老人而引火燒身的官司。你班同學對此進行了激烈辯論，請你結合辯論情況，用英語為校報寫一篇報道，并發表自己的看法。注意：1.詞數100左右。2.可適當發揮，以使行文連貫。3.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。4.參考詞匯官司：lawsuit
A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over.”
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A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over.”Some classmates think we have responsibility to help them, because we Chinese have fine traditions to help people in trouble. While others have quite different opinions. They think we should leave a distance off and help to call 120, because in recent years many lawsuits have happened due to helping the old people. The helpers had to pay the injured a lot of money.In my opinion, when we help the old people, we should depend on specific situation. When the old person is in great danger and badly needs help, we should give an immediate first aid and help to send him or her to the nearest hospital. When the old person is slightly injured, we’d better help to call the police.
（三）
假設你叫李明，下面是你的一位外國筆友Kristie給你寫的電子郵件，詢問有關小悅悅事件的情況。
Dear Li Ming, I learned from a news flash that a twoyear-old girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south China town．I’m very shocked．I used to think the Chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when I was on a visit in China two years ago．So I doubt whether it was true news．Can you tell me what you learned about this incident?
Sincerely yours,
Kristie
請你給她回一封郵件，要點如下：1．社會陷入自責和反思；2．某些路人的冷漠或許另有原因，可最終還是有一名拾荒阿姨挺身而出；3．單個事件不能代表中國，助人為樂一直是中國的傳統美德。注意：
1．不能照抄原信件語句；
2．可自由發揮添加細節；
3．詞數100左右；
4．回信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。 參考詞匯：倫理道德ethical and moral （adj．）;
virtue （n．）
Dear Kristie, I was in very low spirits
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【參考范文】
Dear Kristie,
I was in very low spirits when hearing this shocking news, and so was the whole nation．All the people have been undertaking a thoughtful review of the ethical and moral challenges we are faced with．While we blame those hardhearted passersby, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes．For various reasons there is a growing tendency for people to keep away from being involved in such accidents．However, on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior．Luckily in the story you mentioned, an old lady, who earned her life by collecting rubbish, came to the little girl’s aid and helped rush her to hospital．So we have every reason to believe that the Chinese traditional virtues of being ready to help others will remain forever．
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
預測三：
近年來，由食品衛生安全引發的問題在校園內外時有發生。你校上周就發生了一次食物中毒事件，兩名學生在校外吃了一種油炸食品而引起胃痛。請你以李華的名義用英文給學校英語報社編輯寫一封信，談談你對這一現象的看法。詞數：100左右。內容必須包括：1.有些商家只顧賺錢，無視人們的健康和安全；2.學生應盡量在校園內吃飯，不要到校外亂吃；3.為了防止類似事件發生， 提出你的建議。Dear editor,
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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Dear editor,Last week,two students of our school suffered from stomachache because they ate some poisonous fried food outside campus.Nowadays in our country,some business people care little about people’s health and safety as long as they can make money.Some even sell polluted or poisonous food to consumers and this often leads to serious health problems.In order to prevent such tragedy happening again,we students should try to avoid buying food from the stores or stalls out of the school,and have meals in school dining rooms.Only in this way can we protect ourselves.Besides,the local government and the school should take practical measures to ensure students’ health and life security.I’m expecting your advice and ideas.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
預測四：
假如你叫李華，是一位高中生。隨著科技的發展，iPod已成為中學生的新寵。用iPod既可聽音樂、閱讀純文本電子書，又可玩電子游戲。請你用英語給某英語報社寫一封信，談談中學生使用iPod的情況。信的內容須包括以下幾點：1.使用iPod對學習的好處。2.對課堂紀律和學習可能產生的負面影響。3.提出自己的建議并說明理由。注意：1.開頭、結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數；2.詞數100左右。
Dear Editor,I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua.Now many students have iPods and think it’s a fashion to use them.Using an iPod,we can listen to music,download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Some students,however,bring their iPods to classroom and listen to music with earphones,which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed.What’s worse,some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion,as a student,we should make good use of iPod to help achieve academic success.Classroom is a place for students to study,and therefore,the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPods in a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
預測五：
近年微博（microblog）在中國越來越流行，2011年也被有關媒體稱為“微博元年”。假設你是校報記者，請根據下列提示為校報寫一篇介紹微博的英語短文。1.非常方便，人們可以隨時利用微博來表達心聲，交流想法；2.給人們提供了一種釋放壓力的方式；3.與朋友分享心情，增進他們之間的了解；4.也有潛在的危險，有可能泄露個人隱私或其他重要信息；5.綜上所述，使用微博要謹慎。詞數：100左右（已給部分不計入總詞數）Microblog has become part of our life.
【參考范文】Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.
預測六：
為開展“敬老”活動，你校特意邀請了梁會蘭女士來做報告。梁會蘭女士是北京下崗工人，16年來，她義務照顧十幾位孤寡老人和殘疾老人的生活起居。請你據此以校學生會的名義寫一個通知，要點如下：1.報告的目的；2.報告人介紹；3.報告時間和地點：2011年12月26日下午4:00~6:00,學校報告廳；4.參加人員：全體學生。注意：1.詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.通知的格式已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Notice
Fellow students,
December 14,2011
Students’ Union
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Notice
Fellow students,In order to call on everybody to respect the elderly,our school will invite Ms Liang Huilan to give us a report.Liang Huilan,a laid off worker in Beijing,has been voluntarily taking good care of more than ten elderly people who live alone or have disabilities over the past 16 years,for which she has won great respect from people around her and has been awarded various honors by the government.The report will be given in the lecture hall of our school on the afternoon of December 26,and it will last two hours(from 4:00 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.).All the students are required to attend it.Don’t be late.
December 14,2011
Students’ Union
預測七：
假如你叫王麗,是一位高中生。請你用英語給報社寫一封信，反映如下情況并談談你的想法：現在有很多學生使用手機,一是認為這是種時髦,二是認為便于跟家人和朋友聯系。一些學生把手機帶進教室，在課堂上經常聽見手機的鈴聲。破壞課堂紀律。有的同學還在課堂上發短信息，浪費寶貴的時間。建議：教室是學習的地方，需要安靜；學生不應該在教室里使用手機；應該集中注意力學習。（附：自己再想一條建議）注意： 信的開頭已給出；詞數: 100左右。Dear Editor,I’m a senior high school student．Yours sincerely,
Wang Li
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Dear Editor,I’m a senior high school student.Now many students use mobile phones.They think it’s a fashion to use mobile phones. Besides,it’s very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones.But some students break the rules in class.They bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class.Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phones.In my opinion,the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge.Those with mobile phones shouldn’t take mobile phones to the classroom.We are supposed to concentrate on our studies.The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Li
預測八：
請根據下面提供的內容寫一篇人物簡介。
1982年2月26日出生，從小就對運動有天賦，6歲開始練習羽毛球，9歲轉學網球；主要經歷及獲得榮譽1.2002年：離開網球場，到大學讀書;兩年后重返球場；
2.在包括她丈夫在內的幾位著名教練的指導下，進步神速；
3.2011年：法國公開賽女子單打冠軍。第一位獲得大滿貫賽事單打冠軍的亞洲網球選手。參考詞匯：1.法國公開賽:French Open
2.女子單打冠軍：women’s singles title
3.大滿貫：Grand Slam
1.詞數100左右；
2.短文中不能出現本人相關信息。
Born on Feb.26,1982,Li Na has a gift for sports from her childhood.She began to practice badminton at the age of six and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine.In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university,but two years later she returned.With the help of some famous coaches,including her husband,she has been making greater and greater achievements.As a result,she won the 2011 French Open women’s singles title,becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.
預測九：
法國哲學家盧梭說過：“No Thanksgiving would be no virtue.”（沒有感恩就沒有真正的美德。）如今社會上一些人缺乏感恩之心，少數人甚至在父母年老體弱時都不愿意贍養。請你結合自己的實際，談幾點父母值得你感恩的地方，以及將來你會做些什么來報答父母的養育之恩。注意：1．短文的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。
2．100詞左右。（感恩:thanksgiving）Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.
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Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow. I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 3.Luckily for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, which I appreciate so much. What I should do now is to study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.
