第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析

　　新題賞析

　　全國新課標

　　題一：

　　My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

　　We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

　　It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

　　題二：

　　Dear Mom,

　　Mother’s Day was coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you.

　　Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day!

　　Your little girl,

　　Jennifer

　　全國I卷uch after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of

　　77._________

　　the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I

　　78._________

　　was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories

　　79._________

　　till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant

　　80._________

　　view there. You told me the name of different plants and their

　　81._________

　　characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology

　　82._________

　　and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now

　　83.________

　　my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study

　　84.________

　　and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since

　　85.________

　　we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.

　　Yours,

　　Daisy

　　題四：

　　An English lady was finally decided that she really should

　　66_______

　　learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her

　　67_______

　　driving test and told her husband that. To release，he

　　68_______

　　was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But

　　69_______

　　then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that

　　70_______

　　they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your

　　71_______

　　mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because

　　72_______

　　of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have

　　73______

　　been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t

　　74______

　　get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。”

　　75______

　　全國II卷It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first

　　76_______

　　____

　　prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do

　　77_______

　　____

　　was to write a story or present it. My teachers

　　78_______

　　____

　　have been telling me how great my writing was.

　　79___

　　____

　　So if they had said was true, I would have a chance

　　80____

　　___

　　of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful

　　81.

　　help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living

　　82.

　　near my house , who was a very much famous writer

　　83

　　He agreed to reading my story and give me some

　　84

　　advices on how to write like a real writer.

　　85

　　題六：

　　Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76.

　　At that time, we often spend time together. 77.

　　Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78.

　　study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79.

　　other words, we would be separated for long time. 80.

　　Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81.

　　my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82.

　　gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83.

　　kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84.

　　look forward to see her again in the near future. 85.

　　第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析

　　主講教師：林斌

　　北京八十中學英語高級教師

　　新題賞析

　　全國新課標

　　題一：

　　1. visit-visited

　　2. but-and/so

　　3 to

　　4. comfortably改為comfortable

　　5. were改為was

　　6. for改為with

　　7. taking改為taken

　　8. dish改為dishes

　　9. such后加a

　　10. me改為mine

　　解析：

　　1.根據時間狀語last month可知本句時態是一般過去時，故動詞用過去式。

　　2. 前后文是順延或者因果關系，所以連詞用so或者and。

　　3. anywhere是指地點的副詞，前面不用介詞。

　　4. 修飾后面的名詞room，要用形容詞。

　　5. what引導的主語從句作主語，謂語動詞根據后面的表語決定，此處后面是單數，所以用was。

　　6. 動詞share常與with構成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。

　　7. 非謂語動詞做后置定語，被修飾的詞和take之間構成被動關系，所以要用過去分詞。

　　8. 由several修飾，后面名詞要用復數。

　　9. hotel是可數名詞，前面要加a。

　　10. 雙重所有格的構成是of+名詞性物主代詞或者所有格。

　　題二：

　　1. was改為is

　　2. your改為you

　　3. thank改為thanks

　　4. on

　　5. by改為for

　　6. teach改為teaching

　　7. had改為have

　　8. may后加not

　　9. Whenever改為Wherever

　　10. Hope改為Wish

　　解析：

　　1. 指的是現在馬上就要到母親節了。

　　2. 此處動詞send接雙賓語，應使用賓格形式，構成短語send sb. sth.。

　　3.“表達感謝”應為：express one’s thanks。

　　4. 在副詞today之前不用介詞，故去掉。

　　5. Thank sb. for…為固定短語“因…而感謝”。

　　6. 此處是but連接的用于介詞之后的并列的動名詞形式。

　　7. 全篇文章屬于現在的時態，故將過去完成時改為現在完成時。

　　8. 句意為：媽媽，雖然我可能沒有經常說，但我確實很愛你。

　　9. 根據句意：無論我在哪里，我總是愛你的。

　　10. 動詞hope后不能接雙賓語，應用wish符合語境和語法規則。

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　　題三：

　　76. those改為these

　　77. after改為since

　　78. happily改為happy

　　79. child前加a

　　80. fall改為fell

　　81. name改為names

　　82. interesting改為interested

　　83.

　　into

　　84. are改為is

　　85. use改為used

　　解析：

　　76. these days意為近來。

　　77. since意為自從……以來，主句中用現在完成時。

　　78. feel意為感覺，是系動詞，后面要跟形容詞做表語。

　　79. child是單數可數名詞，前面要加a。

　　80.指的是過去，所以要用過去式fell。

　　81. 后面指的是不同的植物，所以name要用復數形式。

　　82. 主語是人，對……感興趣要用be interested in。

　　83. enter本身就是及物動詞，后面不需要加介詞。

　　84. together with連接兩個主語的時候，后面的謂語動詞要和前面的保持一致，此處要和Ann保持一致，所以要用單數謂語動詞is。

　　85. 此處是被動語態，表示被用來，所以用be used。

　　題四：

　　66.去掉finally 前的was

　　67. past→passed

　　68. he→she

　　69. √

　　70. after→before

　　71 How→Why

　　72. by→in

　　73. right→the right

　　74. couldn’t→can’t

　　75. peoples→people

　　解析：

　　66. lady與decide 之間為主動關系。

　　67. 此處意為“通過”，應使用pass的過去式。

　　68. 此處應為妻子要帶丈夫去法國，應用女性的人稱代詞。

　　69. √

　　70.

　　此處應為在此次旅行之間，妻子就因不適應右側駕駛改變了主意。

　　71

　　此處為丈夫對妻子突然改變主意不理解，而詢問原因。

　　72.

　　in surprise 為固定搭配，意為“驚奇地，驚訝地”。

　　73.

　　方位名詞前腰加定冠詞。

　　74.

　　此處應為目前還不是要右側駕駛，應用現在時。

　　75.

　　people本身就是復數名詞，不需要在后面加s。

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　　題五：

　　76. √

　　77. on改為in

　　78. or改為and

　　79. have改為had

　　80. if后加what

　　81. were 改為was

　　82. gentleman前加a

　　83. much

　　84. reading改為read

　　85. advices改為advice

　　解析：

　　76. √

　　77. in…show “在……節目里”。

　　78. or表選擇，and表順接和并列。

　　79. 此處應該指的是獲獎之前，獲獎是過去，所以此處要用過去的過去，即過去完成時。

　　80. what引導主語從句，在句中意思為“……的話”。

　　81. 不可數名詞謂語動詞用單數。

　　82. gentleman是可數名詞。

　　83.“非常出名”，very修飾形容詞，very much修飾動詞。

　　84. agree to do sth.“同意做某事”，to后跟動詞原形。

　　85. advice是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。

　　題六：

　　76. friend → friends

　　77. spend →spent

　　78. Thank →Thanks

　　79. √

　　80. for a long

　　81. off

　　82. him →her

　　83. has →had

　　84. kept后加in

　　85. see →seeing

　　解析：

　　76. one of 后接名詞復數，表示許多的當中的一個。

　　77. At that time“那時候”所以此處表示過去發生的事情。

　　78. Thanks to 是固定短語，“多虧了，因為”。

　　79. √

　　80. For a long time表示“一段時間”，固定短語。

　　81. leave 已經表示離開之意，off多余。

　　82. 代詞使用要一致，根據上下文可知是女她。

　　83. 時態錯誤，主句中said是過去，所以從句中要用相應的過去，所以應為過去完成時。

　　84. 固定短語keep in touch with表示“與人保持聯系”。

　　85. look forward to中的to是介詞，后接動詞時要用動名詞形式。

　　第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析

　　新題賞析

　　全國新課標

　　題一：

　　My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

　　We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

　　It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

　　題二：

　　Dear Mom,

　　Mother’s Day was coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you.

　　Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day!

　　Your little girl,

　　Jennifer

　　全國I卷uch after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of

　　77._________

　　the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I

　　78._________

　　was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories

　　79._________

　　till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant

　　80._________

　　view there. You told me the name of different plants and their

　　81._________

　　characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology

　　82._________

　　and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now

　　83.________

　　my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study

　　84.________

　　and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since

　　85.________

　　we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.

　　Yours,

　　Daisy

　　題四：

　　An English lady was finally decided that she really should

　　66_______

　　learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her

　　67_______

　　driving test and told her husband that. To release，he

　　68_______

　　was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But

　　69_______

　　then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that

　　70_______

　　they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your

　　71_______

　　mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because

　　72_______

　　of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have

　　73______

　　been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t

　　74______

　　get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。”

　　75______

　　全國II卷It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first

　　76_______

　　____

　　prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do

　　77_______

　　____

　　was to write a story or present it. My teachers

　　78_______

　　____

　　have been telling me how great my writing was.

　　79___

　　____

　　So if they had said was true, I would have a chance

　　80____

　　___

　　of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful

　　81.

　　help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living

　　82.

　　near my house , who was a very much famous writer

　　83

　　He agreed to reading my story and give me some

　　84

　　advices on how to write like a real writer.

　　85

　　題六：

　　Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76.

　　At that time, we often spend time together. 77.

　　Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78.

　　study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79.

　　other words, we would be separated for long time. 80.

　　Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81.

　　my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82.

　　gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83.

　　kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84.

　　look forward to see her again in the near future. 85.

　　第15講 短文改錯2024新題賞析

　　主講教師：林斌

　　北京八十中學英語高級教師

　　新題賞析

　　全國新課標

　　題一：

　　1. visit-visited

　　2. but-and/so

　　3 to

　　4. comfortably改為comfortable

　　5. were改為was

　　6. for改為with

　　7. taking改為taken

　　8. dish改為dishes

　　9. such后加a

　　10. me改為mine

　　解析：

　　1.根據時間狀語last month可知本句時態是一般過去時，故動詞用過去式。

　　2. 前后文是順延或者因果關系，所以連詞用so或者and。

　　3. anywhere是指地點的副詞，前面不用介詞。

　　4. 修飾后面的名詞room，要用形容詞。

　　5. what引導的主語從句作主語，謂語動詞根據后面的表語決定，此處后面是單數，所以用was。

　　6. 動詞share常與with構成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。

　　7. 非謂語動詞做后置定語，被修飾的詞和take之間構成被動關系，所以要用過去分詞。

　　8. 由several修飾，后面名詞要用復數。

　　9. hotel是可數名詞，前面要加a。

　　10. 雙重所有格的構成是of+名詞性物主代詞或者所有格。

　　題二：

　　1. was改為is

　　2. your改為you

　　3. thank改為thanks

　　4. on

　　5. by改為for

　　6. teach改為teaching

　　7. had改為have

　　8. may后加not

　　9. Whenever改為Wherever

　　10. Hope改為Wish

　　解析：

　　1. 指的是現在馬上就要到母親節了。

　　2. 此處動詞send接雙賓語，應使用賓格形式，構成短語send sb. sth.。

　　3.“表達感謝”應為：express one’s thanks。

　　4. 在副詞today之前不用介詞，故去掉。

　　5. Thank sb. for…為固定短語“因…而感謝”。

　　6. 此處是but連接的用于介詞之后的并列的動名詞形式。

　　7. 全篇文章屬于現在的時態，故將過去完成時改為現在完成時。

　　8. 句意為：媽媽，雖然我可能沒有經常說，但我確實很愛你。

　　9. 根據句意：無論我在哪里，我總是愛你的。

　　10. 動詞hope后不能接雙賓語，應用wish符合語境和語法規則。

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　　題三：

　　76. those改為these

　　77. after改為since

　　78. happily改為happy

　　79. child前加a

　　80. fall改為fell

　　81. name改為names

　　82. interesting改為interested

　　83.

　　into

　　84. are改為is

　　85. use改為used

　　解析：

　　76. these days意為近來。

　　77. since意為自從……以來，主句中用現在完成時。

　　78. feel意為感覺，是系動詞，后面要跟形容詞做表語。

　　79. child是單數可數名詞，前面要加a。

　　80.指的是過去，所以要用過去式fell。

　　81. 后面指的是不同的植物，所以name要用復數形式。

　　82. 主語是人，對……感興趣要用be interested in。

　　83. enter本身就是及物動詞，后面不需要加介詞。

　　84. together with連接兩個主語的時候，后面的謂語動詞要和前面的保持一致，此處要和Ann保持一致，所以要用單數謂語動詞is。

　　85. 此處是被動語態，表示被用來，所以用be used。

　　題四：

　　66.去掉finally 前的was

　　67. past→passed

　　68. he→she

　　69. √

　　70. after→before

　　71 How→Why

　　72. by→in

　　73. right→the right

　　74. couldn’t→can’t

　　75. peoples→people

　　解析：

　　66. lady與decide 之間為主動關系。

　　67. 此處意為“通過”，應使用pass的過去式。

　　68. 此處應為妻子要帶丈夫去法國，應用女性的人稱代詞。

　　69. √

　　70.

　　此處應為在此次旅行之間，妻子就因不適應右側駕駛改變了主意。

　　71

　　此處為丈夫對妻子突然改變主意不理解，而詢問原因。

　　72.

　　in surprise 為固定搭配，意為“驚奇地，驚訝地”。

　　73.

　　方位名詞前腰加定冠詞。

　　74.

　　此處應為目前還不是要右側駕駛，應用現在時。

　　75.

　　people本身就是復數名詞，不需要在后面加s。

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　　題五：

　　76. √

　　77. on改為in

　　78. or改為and

　　79. have改為had

　　80. if后加what

　　81. were 改為was

　　82. gentleman前加a

　　83. much

　　84. reading改為read

　　85. advices改為advice

　　解析：

　　76. √

　　77. in…show “在……節目里”。

　　78. or表選擇，and表順接和并列。

　　79. 此處應該指的是獲獎之前，獲獎是過去，所以此處要用過去的過去，即過去完成時。

　　80. what引導主語從句，在句中意思為“……的話”。

　　81. 不可數名詞謂語動詞用單數。

　　82. gentleman是可數名詞。

　　83.“非常出名”，very修飾形容詞，very much修飾動詞。

　　84. agree to do sth.“同意做某事”，to后跟動詞原形。

　　85. advice是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。

　　題六：

　　76. friend → friends

　　77. spend →spent

　　78. Thank →Thanks

　　79. √

　　80. for a long

　　81. off

　　82. him →her

　　83. has →had

　　84. kept后加in

　　85. see →seeing

　　解析：

　　76. one of 后接名詞復數，表示許多的當中的一個。

　　77. At that time“那時候”所以此處表示過去發生的事情。

　　78. Thanks to 是固定短語，“多虧了，因為”。

　　79. √

　　80. For a long time表示“一段時間”，固定短語。

　　81. leave 已經表示離開之意，off多余。

　　82. 代詞使用要一致，根據上下文可知是女她。

　　83. 時態錯誤，主句中said是過去，所以從句中要用相應的過去，所以應為過去完成時。

　　84. 固定短語keep in touch with表示“與人保持聯系”。

　　85. look forward to中的to是介詞，后接動詞時要用動名詞形式。