2024英語(yǔ)必考點(diǎn)逐個(gè)擊破快速提分：考點(diǎn)妙解14 提綱類(lèi)

　　本類(lèi)考題解答錦囊

　　提綱式作文又是高考書(shū)面表達(dá)的一個(gè)特色。出題的形式就是給出某種情景和內(nèi)容要求，請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)這一情景及要求寫(xiě)出自己的思想。這類(lèi)題型相對(duì)于其他類(lèi)型的題來(lái)說(shuō)，特點(diǎn)在于考生可以充分發(fā)揮自己的思維想象能力，進(jìn)而組織自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種思想。因此，這類(lèi)題具有較大的靈活性，也能產(chǎn)好地體現(xiàn)考生的英語(yǔ)思維想象能力。不像其它類(lèi)題型，千篇一律。但缺點(diǎn)就是老師的評(píng)卷、給分缺少了客觀性標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，主觀性較強(qiáng)。

　　對(duì)于這類(lèi)題型的處理，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，把握準(zhǔn)情景和要求，使表達(dá)的內(nèi)容不走題；其次，根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料；最后，進(jìn)行合理的總結(jié)。

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　　高考最新熱門(mén)題

　　1.(典型例題卷)

　　假設(shè)你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Paul想在署假來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。你幫他詢問(wèn)了署期漢語(yǔ)班的情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求寫(xiě)一封回信。

　　時(shí)間：7月初開(kāi)始，4小時(shí)／天(周一至周五)

　　程度：三個(gè)級(jí)別(初級(jí)到高級(jí))

　　授課老師經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，小班上課

　　注意：

　　1．詞數(shù)：100左右；

　　2．可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

　　Dear Paul，

　　…

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　命題目的與解題技巧：本題考查以提綱形式寫(xiě)書(shū)面表達(dá)

　　【解析】本文是作者在知道朋友要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)后，給朋友寫(xiě)一封回信介紹署期漢語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)班的情況。從形式來(lái)看，這是一封書(shū)信；從內(nèi)容上來(lái)說(shuō)，它是一篇說(shuō)明文。由于所介紹的是即將發(fā)生的事情，故用一般將來(lái)時(shí)、混合人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)作。

　　【答案】

　　One possible version: Dear Paul,

　　I am so glad that you are planning to take a summer course in China. Our university runs summer Chinese language courses at three levels, from beginning to advanced. All the courses start in early July. Lessons will be given in small classes of no more than ten students. You will get a lot of practice in such a class. All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. Classes meet four hours a day, five days a week-Monday to Friday. If you decide to come or need any further information , do let me know.

　　Yours.

　　2.(典型例題)

　　假設(shè)你是李華，你在報(bào)上看到北京電視臺(tái)今年七月將舉行外國(guó)人“學(xué)中文，唱中文歌”才藝大賽。你的美國(guó)朋友Peter正在北京一所大學(xué)學(xué)中文，你覺(jué)得他應(yīng)去試一試。請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)給他寫(xiě)信告知此事，并表示可以提供幫助。

　　比賽時(shí)間：7月18日

　　報(bào)名時(shí)間：截止到6月30日

　　報(bào)名地點(diǎn)：北京電視臺(tái)

　　注意：

　　1．詞數(shù)：100左右

　　2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

　　3．參考詞匯：才藝大賽talent show

　　【解析】本文是一封給朋友的書(shū)信，勸說(shuō)朋友去參加比賽，從體裁上來(lái)看應(yīng)該是說(shuō)明文。文章中涉及到的人稱(chēng)主要是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)；由于事情還未發(fā)生，因此為將來(lái)時(shí)。要點(diǎn)：(1)消息的來(lái)源；(2)消息的內(nèi)容，包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、事件內(nèi)容；(3)建議和幫助。

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Peter,

　　I read in a newspaper today that a "Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs" Foreigners'Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing,and you are yn Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent,and how well you've learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you'll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you , I would be more than glad to help.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　3．（典型例題）

　　假設(shè)你叫張華，現(xiàn)就讀于加拿大的Toronto Universtry.你的室友不講衛(wèi)一，休息時(shí)間大聲播放音樂(lè)，隨意動(dòng)用他人物品，常帶朋友喝酒喧鬧。你為此深感苦惱，寫(xiě)信給好友李明求助。

　　注意：

　　1．信的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)人總詞數(shù))。

　　2．詞數(shù)：100左右

　　3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章意思連貫。

　　4．參考詞匯：衛(wèi)生sanitation

　　December 13th，20典型例題r

　　Li Ming，

　　Iamstudying in Toronto University in Canada Now

　　____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　__________

　　Yours，

　　Zhang Hua

　　Dear Li Ming,

　　December 13th, 20典型例題m studying in Toronto University in Canada. Now I have a problem, which always troubles me, So I want to ask you for help.

　　Tom, who is one of my roommates, never pays attention to sanitation, leaving his things out of place. As he likes mu- sic, he often plays music loudly while others are having a rest. What's worse, he often brings some of his friends to our room to drink, talking and laughing so loudly that we can't have a good rest. Besides, what you can't imagine is that he is always using others'daily things without permission.

　　I have no idea what to do next. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Hua

　　4.(典型例題

　　最近幾年越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)生加入打工的隊(duì)請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下表，就這一現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇短文。

　　現(xiàn)象：

　　1．根據(jù)最近調(diào)查，約25％的大學(xué)生打零工。

　　2．在署假，這一數(shù)字將增至27％。

　　3．大學(xué)生常做的零活有家教、服務(wù)員、銷(xiāo)售員等。

　　原因：

　　1．想賺錢(qián)支付一部分日益增長(zhǎng)的學(xué)費(fèi)。

　　2．想經(jīng)濟(jì)上獨(dú)立，買(mǎi)一些自己想買(mǎi)的東西。

　　意義：

　　1．能獲取工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，拓寬視野。

　　2．能給大學(xué)生提供一個(gè)了解外部世界的機(jī)會(huì)。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數(shù)：100左右；

　　2．參考詞匯：經(jīng)濟(jì)economy;家教tutou；學(xué)費(fèi)tuition

　　3．開(kāi)頭部分已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

　　According to a recent survey，______________ _________________________

　　___________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案： Computers in China

　　According to a recent investigation, about 30% of the city families have computers. Besides, many village people are more and more interested in computers and some of them even have bought computers. About 70% of the parents bought comput- ers for their children to study, and some for their work. And e- ven some people bought them for entertainment. The fact how the middle school students use the computers really surprises us. Only about 30% of them use computers to find out useful

　　information. About 60% of them use computers to chat with other people on the Intemet. What is worse, about 60% use computers to play games and 20% use computers to watch VCDs or listen to music. In my opinion, we should make better use of our best invention--computers.

　　5.(典型例題附中)

　　北京現(xiàn)在已成功地申請(qǐng)了2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì)，許多外國(guó)旅游團(tuán)來(lái)到了北京參觀。假如你是一名北京市民，向外國(guó)友人介紹北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的情況。根據(jù)要求完成演講，詞數(shù)在120個(gè)左右，內(nèi)容包括：

　　1．中國(guó)占世界總?cè)丝诘奈宸种唬诒本┡e辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)將會(huì)向更多的人民宣傳奧林匹克精神。

　　2．北京歷史悠久，文化燦爛，建于3典型例題悠久的歷史。

　　3．城市發(fā)展迅速，擁有一流的通訊、交通設(shè)施和賓館。

　　4．北京將建設(shè)成為一個(gè)由森林草地環(huán)抱的大型現(xiàn)代化的奧運(yùn)公園，它是員創(chuàng)造最佳成績(jī)的理想場(chǎng)地。

　　5．北京有豐富的舉辦大型運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

　　6．在二十八屆雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌榜上中國(guó)位居第二位。

　　答案： Ladies and gentlemen,

　　Welcome to Beijing! I'm glad to introduce Beijing to you. China makes up one fifth of the world's total population. An O- lympic event in Beijing will spread the Olympic message to more people and increase the popularity of Olympic sports. Bei- jing was built 3,典型例題rs ago, and has been the capital of Chi- na for more than 800 years with splendid culture. She is a rap- idly developing city with first-class communication, traffic and hotels. She will build a beautiful large modern Olympic park surrounded by a forest and green land, which is a perfect place for athletes to achieve their best performances. She has rich ex- perience in holding big sports games. China came second in the medal tables of the 28th Olympic (Games held in Athens.

　　That's all ! Thank you.

　　6.(典型例題科技大學(xué)附中)

　　假如你是李華，你的英語(yǔ)老師要求你們明天上午去武進(jìn)影劇院聽(tīng)一個(gè)由李陽(yáng)老師所做的英語(yǔ)講你因故不能參加，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一封短信向你的老師請(qǐng)假。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：表示歉意

　　原因：去機(jī)場(chǎng)接海外歸來(lái)朋友

　　詢問(wèn)：是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽(tīng)講座

　　注意：

　　1．安數(shù)：100詞左右；

　　2．可以根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Sir，

　　____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　答案：Dear Sir,

　　I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the English lec- ture which will be given by Mr. Li Yang in WuJin Cinema to- morrow morning. I have a friend who is returning home from a- broad tomorrow morning and I have promised to meet him at the airport.

　　You know I am very interested in English learning. I won- der if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean so much to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

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　　題點(diǎn)經(jīng)典類(lèi)型題

　　1.(00，春招)

　　為了豐富外國(guó)留學(xué)生的生活，你校學(xué)生會(huì)將舉行一次音樂(lè)周活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以組織者的身份寫(xiě)一個(gè)書(shū)面通知。有關(guān)內(nèi)容如下：

　　時(shí)間：5月第l周

　　活動(dòng)：1．演唱歌曲：流行歌曲

　　2．器樂(lè)演奏：古典民間音樂(lè)

　　3．音樂(lè)比賽：聽(tīng)歌曲片斷，然后猜出處

　　地點(diǎn)：屆時(shí)通知

　　參加者請(qǐng)于4月20日前報(bào)名。

　　注意：1．書(shū)面通知應(yīng)寫(xiě)成一篇連貫的短文；

　　2．可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)；

　　3．詞數(shù)100左右；

　　4．通知格式已為你寫(xiě)好；

　　5．生詞：古典——classical

　　民間——folk

　　樂(lè)器——musical instruments

　　Dear students，

　　__________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　_________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Come to the great fun!

　　Students’Union

　　命題目的與解題技巧：本題考查以文字提示寫(xiě)一篇書(shū)面表達(dá)

　　【解析】1．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

　　(1)學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦音樂(lè)周

　　(2)介紹音樂(lè)周的演唱及演奏內(nèi)容

　　(3)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容還包括音樂(lè)比賽

　　(4)介紹音樂(lè)比賽的內(nèi)容和方法

　　(5)報(bào)名時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和方法

　　2．學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦音樂(lè)周。也可以表達(dá)為：

　　The Students Union will hold a music week. A music week will be held by the Students Union.

　　3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容也要以表達(dá)為

　　There will be singing pop songs and playing classical and folk music.

　　【答案】One possible version:

　　Dear students,

　　The Students Union has decided to organize a music week.It will be held in the first week of May. The activities include signing pop songs and palying classical and folk music. Bringyour own musical instruments, plesae. A music contest will be included,too. The students taking part in the contest will listento part of a song or a piece of music, and then guess where it comes from. If you'd like to take part in the music week, pleasecome and sign up for it befire April 20th. The place for the activities will be announced later.

　　Come to the great fun!

　　Students' Union

　　2. (典型例題)

　　寒假將至，班認(rèn)行要為每位同學(xué)寫(xiě)份《家庭報(bào)告書(shū)》，向家長(zhǎng)匯報(bào)學(xué)生在校的情況。英國(guó)女留學(xué)生MarySmith在你們班學(xué)習(xí)將近一個(gè)學(xué)期了，假如你是班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下各位老師對(duì)她的評(píng)價(jià)為班主任張華老師代筆，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份《家庭報(bào)告書(shū)》，介紹Mary在校的表現(xiàn)，以便寄給她遠(yuǎn)在英國(guó)的父母。

　　班主任：樂(lè)于助人，有禮貌，與師生相處融洽：同學(xué)閃希望能邀請(qǐng)她到自己家里過(guò)“春節(jié)”；

　　語(yǔ)文老師：對(duì)中文有濃厚興趣，課內(nèi)外能用中文與師生交流；

　　數(shù)學(xué)老師：數(shù)學(xué)不錯(cuò)，經(jīng)常幫老師收發(fā)作業(yè)；英語(yǔ)老師：經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；

　　化學(xué)老師：喜歡做實(shí)驗(yàn)，但有時(shí)不夠細(xì)心；物理老師：她是班里物理學(xué)得最好的學(xué)生之一。

　　要求：

　　1．內(nèi)容完整。

　　2．寫(xiě)信日期：20典型例題日

　　3．字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右。

　　4．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，供參考。

　　參考詞匯：春節(jié)the Spring festival交流communicate with November 6，20典型例題rMr．& Mrs．Smith，

　　I'm so glad to tell you some thing about_______________________________________________________

　　__

　　_________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours truly，

　　Zhang Hua

　　答案：Dear Mr. & Mrs. Smith,

　　I'm so glad to tell you something about Mary, your lovely daughter when she is studying here in China. She is a clever girl with good manners. She is always ready to help others, es- pecially those poor in English and therefore gets along well with her teachers and classmates. She has a special interest in Chi- nese and has learned so well that she can communicate with us in Chinese both in and outside class.

　　Mary is also good at maths and often helps the teacher collect and hand out the exer- cise-books. She enjoys doing experiments in chemistry labs, but sometimes she is not careful enough. She is one of the best students in physics, too. All the teachers like her and all her classmates would like to invite her home for the Spring Festival if she likes.

　　Yours truly, Zhang Hua

　　3.(典型例題)

　　假定城關(guān)(Chengguan)中學(xué)生王老師曾去澳大利一所中學(xué)任教，結(jié)識(shí)一位當(dāng)?shù)氐慕處烳rStevens。請(qǐng)以王老師的兩位學(xué)生張華和李雷的名義，用英語(yǔ)給MrStevens寫(xiě)一封信。寫(xiě)信日期是20典型例題0日。信中須包括以下內(nèi)容：

　　(1)王老師常介紹他在澳大利亞的經(jīng)歷；

　　(2)想了解澳大利亞中學(xué)生的興趣愛(ài)好和業(yè)余生活等情況；

　　(3)希望與Mr．Stevens的學(xué)生交朋友，互相通信；

　　(4)請(qǐng)MrStevens為我們尋找筆友。

　　注意：(1)不要逐句翻譯題目說(shuō)明，要求意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚，格式正確；(2)詞數(shù)100左右。

　　答案：Dear Mr Stevens,

　　We are students of Mr Wang,who taught in your School a few years ago. He often tells us about his pleasant experiences in your country. We are eager to know what the students of our age in your country are interested in , and what they do in their spare time. We want very much to make friends with them.