2024高考英語二輪書面表達（四月）訓練集（10）及參考范文
2024高考英語二輪書面表達（四月）訓練集（10）及參考范文
(1)(25 min.)
(2024·長沙一中月考)以下是一名高三學生王海寫給Wise博士的一封信。請以Wise博士的名義回信。
注意：
1. 給出至少三點建議；
2. 詞數不少于120。
Dear Dr. Wise，
I'm a senior 3 student. Since I became a graduating student, I have been staying up late to finish piles of exercises. I often feel sleepy in class. As a result, I miss lots of key points and it usually takes me more time to finish my homework, which makes it difficult for me to concentrate on what I'm doing. What's worse, I haven't made any progress, which made me lose interest and confidence in studying. What should I do?
Sincerely,
Wang Hai
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參考范文
One possible version：
Dear Wang Hai,
Your problem is not unusual among the senior 3 students and I'll give you some suggestions based on my own experiences and many others'.
First of all, make the most of every class. Not only do your teachers possess all the knowledge for the college entrance exam, but they are experienced in making the knowledge yours and in coping with exams.
Second, find out your problems and go all out to solve them. Exercises are not merely a means of consolidating what you have learnt but also a means of finding what you are weak in. If you have a problem, make everything, such as books, teachers or the Internet, a source to tackle it. Last, enough sleep and proper exercise play a key role in achieving high efficiency in our studies, so don't stay up too late and make daily exercise a habit.
After all, efficiency means everything in the third year. Wish you a bright future.
Yours,
Dr. Wise
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Lesson 43? Fully insured? 全保險
Insurance companies are normally willing to insure anything. Insuring public or private property is a standard practice in most countries in the world. If, however, you were holding an open air garden party or a fete it would be equally possible to insure yourself in the event of bad weather. Needless to say, the bigger the risk an insurance company takes, the higher the premium you will have to pay. It is not uncommon to hear that a shipping company has made a claim for the cost of salvaging a sunken ship. But the claim made by a local authority to recover the cost of salvaging a sunken pie dish must surely be unique.
Admittedly it was an unusual pie dish, for it was eighteen feet long and six feet wide. It had been purchased by a local authority so that an enormous pie could be baked for an annual fair. The pie committee decided that the best way to transport the dish would be by canal, so they insured it for the trip. Shortly after it was launched, the pie committee went to a local inn to celebrate. At the same time, a number of teenagers climbed on to the dish and held a little party of their own. Dancing proved to be more than the dish could bear, for during the party it capsized and sank in seven feet of water.
The pie committee telephoned a local garage owner who arrived in a recovery truck to salvage the pie dish. Shivering in their wet clothes, the teenagers looked on while three men dived repeatedly into the water to locate the dish. They had little difficulty in finding it, but hauling it out of the water proved to be a serious problem. The sides of the dish were so smooth that it was almost impossible to attach hawsers and chains to the rim without damaging it. Eventually chains were fixed to one end of the dish and a powerful winch was put into operation. The dish rose to the surface and was gently drawn towards the canal bank. For one agonizing moment, the dish was perched precariously on the bank of the canal, but it suddenly overbalanced and slid back into the water. The men were now obliged to try once more. This time they fixed heavy metal clamps to both sides of the dish so that they could fasten the chains. The dish now had to be lifted vertically because one edge was resting against the side of the canal. The winch was again put into operation and one of the men started up the truck. Several minutes later, the dish was successfully hauled above the surface of the water. Water streamed in torrents over its sides with such force that it set up a huge wave in the canal. There was a danger that the wave would rebound off the other side of the bank and send the dish plunging into the water again. By working at tremendous speed, the men managed to get the dish on to dry land before the wave returned.
保險公司一般說來愿意承保一切東西。承辦公共財產或私人財產保險是世界上大部分國家的正常業務。如果你要舉辦一次露天游園會或盛宴，為避免碰上不好的天氣而遭受損失也同樣可以保險。不用說，保險公司承擔風險越大，你付的保險費也就越高。航運公司為打撈沉船而提出索賠，這是常有的事，但某地當局為打撈一只焙制餡餅的盤子提出索賠，倒是件新鮮事兒。
這個餡餅盤子確實少見，有18英尺長，6英尺寬。某地方當局買下它用來焙制一個巨大的餡餅為一年一度交易會助興。餡餅委員會確認運輸這只盤子的最佳方案是通過運河水運。于是，他們對這只盤子的運輸安全投了保。盤子下水后不久，餡餅委員會成員們來到當地一家小酒店慶賀。就在這個時候，許多十幾歲的孩子爬上盤子舉行他們自己的集會。他們跳起了舞，盤子難以承受。舞會進行過程中，盤子傾覆，沉入了7英尺深的水中。
餡餅委員會給當地汽車修理庫老板打電話，他聞訊后開著一輛急修車前來打撈盤子。那些孩子們穿著濕衣服哆嗦，看著3個工人輪番潛入水中以確定盤子的位置。他們沒費多大事兒就找到了盤子，可是把盤子撈出卻是一個很大的難題。盤子四邊十分光滑，要在盤邊拴上繩索或鏈條而同時又不損壞它是很難辦到的。不過，他們終于將鏈條固定在盤子的一端，一臺大功率的絞車開動起來。盤子慢慢浮出水面，被輕輕地拽向運河岸邊。在令人忐忑不安的瞬間，盤子晃晃悠悠地上了岸，但它突然失去了平衡，又跌回水中。工人們只得再來一次。這次，他們用沉重的金屬夾子把盤子夾住，以便往盤子上安裝鐵鏈。這次，盤子必須垂直吊出水面，因為盤子的一邊緊靠著運河河岸。絞盤機再次啟動，一位工人發動了急修車的引擎。幾分鐘后，盤子被成功地拽出了水面。波浪從盤子兩側急涌而出，在運河里掀起一股大浪。但是當波浪從河對岸折回來時，就有再次把盤子拖進水里的危險。工人們動作迅速，終于趕在那股大浪返回之前把盤子拽到了岸上。
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(2)(25 min.)
(2024·師大附中月考)請你簡要概述圖中所述資訊事件，并針對路人的反應發表自己的看法，如果你是在場的路人之一，你會怎么做？
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參考范文
One possible version：
Since 13th Oct., 2011, China has been captivated by the distressing case of two-year-old girl Xiao Yueyue, who was coldly ignored by passers-by as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van. Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail, including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyue's body without so much as a glance.
In my eyes, those 18 people have shamed the whole of China. Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life, people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.
Any one of us might become the ‘passer-by’ at the side of Xiao Yueyue. If I were one of them, I would stop, move her out of the center of the road, or extend a hand of comfort, carrying her away from danger. Everybody should examine his own conscience: if we were in the same situation next time, how could we help ourselves? Only by lifting a hand to help others, we save ourselves.
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2024高考英語二輪書面表達（四月）訓練集（10）及參考范文
(1)(25 min.)
(2024·長沙一中月考)以下是一名高三學生王海寫給Wise博士的一封信。請以Wise博士的名義回信。
注意：
1. 給出至少三點建議；
2. 詞數不少于120。
Dear Dr. Wise，
I'm a senior 3 student. Since I became a graduating student, I have been staying up late to finish piles of exercises. I often feel sleepy in class. As a result, I miss lots of key points and it usually takes me more time to finish my homework, which makes it difficult for me to concentrate on what I'm doing. What's worse, I haven't made any progress, which made me lose interest and confidence in studying. What should I do?
Sincerely,
Wang Hai
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
參考范文
One possible version：
Dear Wang Hai,
Your problem is not unusual among the senior 3 students and I'll give you some suggestions based on my own experiences and many others'.
First of all, make the most of every class. Not only do your teachers possess all the knowledge for the college entrance exam, but they are experienced in making the knowledge yours and in coping with exams.
Second, find out your problems and go all out to solve them. Exercises are not merely a means of consolidating what you have learnt but also a means of finding what you are weak in. If you have a problem, make everything, such as books, teachers or the Internet, a source to tackle it. Last, enough sleep and proper exercise play a key role in achieving high efficiency in our studies, so don't stay up too late and make daily exercise a habit.
After all, efficiency means everything in the third year. Wish you a bright future.
Yours,
Dr. Wise
***********************************************************結束
Lesson 43? Fully insured? 全保險
Insurance companies are normally willing to insure anything. Insuring public or private property is a standard practice in most countries in the world. If, however, you were holding an open air garden party or a fete it would be equally possible to insure yourself in the event of bad weather. Needless to say, the bigger the risk an insurance company takes, the higher the premium you will have to pay. It is not uncommon to hear that a shipping company has made a claim for the cost of salvaging a sunken ship. But the claim made by a local authority to recover the cost of salvaging a sunken pie dish must surely be unique.
Admittedly it was an unusual pie dish, for it was eighteen feet long and six feet wide. It had been purchased by a local authority so that an enormous pie could be baked for an annual fair. The pie committee decided that the best way to transport the dish would be by canal, so they insured it for the trip. Shortly after it was launched, the pie committee went to a local inn to celebrate. At the same time, a number of teenagers climbed on to the dish and held a little party of their own. Dancing proved to be more than the dish could bear, for during the party it capsized and sank in seven feet of water.
The pie committee telephoned a local garage owner who arrived in a recovery truck to salvage the pie dish. Shivering in their wet clothes, the teenagers looked on while three men dived repeatedly into the water to locate the dish. They had little difficulty in finding it, but hauling it out of the water proved to be a serious problem. The sides of the dish were so smooth that it was almost impossible to attach hawsers and chains to the rim without damaging it. Eventually chains were fixed to one end of the dish and a powerful winch was put into operation. The dish rose to the surface and was gently drawn towards the canal bank. For one agonizing moment, the dish was perched precariously on the bank of the canal, but it suddenly overbalanced and slid back into the water. The men were now obliged to try once more. This time they fixed heavy metal clamps to both sides of the dish so that they could fasten the chains. The dish now had to be lifted vertically because one edge was resting against the side of the canal. The winch was again put into operation and one of the men started up the truck. Several minutes later, the dish was successfully hauled above the surface of the water. Water streamed in torrents over its sides with such force that it set up a huge wave in the canal. There was a danger that the wave would rebound off the other side of the bank and send the dish plunging into the water again. By working at tremendous speed, the men managed to get the dish on to dry land before the wave returned.
保險公司一般說來愿意承保一切東西。承辦公共財產或私人財產保險是世界上大部分國家的正常業務。如果你要舉辦一次露天游園會或盛宴，為避免碰上不好的天氣而遭受損失也同樣可以保險。不用說，保險公司承擔風險越大，你付的保險費也就越高。航運公司為打撈沉船而提出索賠，這是常有的事，但某地當局為打撈一只焙制餡餅的盤子提出索賠，倒是件新鮮事兒。
這個餡餅盤子確實少見，有18英尺長，6英尺寬。某地方當局買下它用來焙制一個巨大的餡餅為一年一度交易會助興。餡餅委員會確認運輸這只盤子的最佳方案是通過運河水運。于是，他們對這只盤子的運輸安全投了保。盤子下水后不久，餡餅委員會成員們來到當地一家小酒店慶賀。就在這個時候，許多十幾歲的孩子爬上盤子舉行他們自己的集會。他們跳起了舞，盤子難以承受。舞會進行過程中，盤子傾覆，沉入了7英尺深的水中。
餡餅委員會給當地汽車修理庫老板打電話，他聞訊后開著一輛急修車前來打撈盤子。那些孩子們穿著濕衣服哆嗦，看著3個工人輪番潛入水中以確定盤子的位置。他們沒費多大事兒就找到了盤子，可是把盤子撈出卻是一個很大的難題。盤子四邊十分光滑，要在盤邊拴上繩索或鏈條而同時又不損壞它是很難辦到的。不過，他們終于將鏈條固定在盤子的一端，一臺大功率的絞車開動起來。盤子慢慢浮出水面，被輕輕地拽向運河岸邊。在令人忐忑不安的瞬間，盤子晃晃悠悠地上了岸，但它突然失去了平衡，又跌回水中。工人們只得再來一次。這次，他們用沉重的金屬夾子把盤子夾住，以便往盤子上安裝鐵鏈。這次，盤子必須垂直吊出水面，因為盤子的一邊緊靠著運河河岸。絞盤機再次啟動，一位工人發動了急修車的引擎。幾分鐘后，盤子被成功地拽出了水面。波浪從盤子兩側急涌而出，在運河里掀起一股大浪。但是當波浪從河對岸折回來時，就有再次把盤子拖進水里的危險。工人們動作迅速，終于趕在那股大浪返回之前把盤子拽到了岸上。
****************************************************結束
(2)(25 min.)
(2024·師大附中月考)請你簡要概述圖中所述資訊事件，并針對路人的反應發表自己的看法，如果你是在場的路人之一，你會怎么做？
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
參考范文
One possible version：
Since 13th Oct., 2011, China has been captivated by the distressing case of two-year-old girl Xiao Yueyue, who was coldly ignored by passers-by as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van. Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail, including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyue's body without so much as a glance.
In my eyes, those 18 people have shamed the whole of China. Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life, people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.
Any one of us might become the ‘passer-by’ at the side of Xiao Yueyue. If I were one of them, I would stop, move her out of the center of the road, or extend a hand of comfort, carrying her away from danger. Everybody should examine his own conscience: if we were in the same situation next time, how could we help ourselves? Only by lifting a hand to help others, we save ourselves.
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