2024考研英語寫作小作文批改范文：邀請信（二）

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第一篇

Dear Bob,

There will be held a wonderful music concern for piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.

I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2024.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob，

There will be held (刪除)a wonderful music (音樂會是concert)concern for(改為concerning) piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary(拼寫錯誤，改為January) 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. (理解有誤，本意是讓你寫在這個occasion后面是另外一個活動)At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.

I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2024.

第二篇

Dear Mark,

There will be a volunteer activitiy in the Children's Welfare Institute Of Nanjing on this weekend . We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 08:00.This will be followed by one more arrangement .At around10:00, there will be another activity after the performance. All of us are going to Zhongshan park to have a Picnic, while helping Lily, the youngest girl in our group, to celebrity her birthday. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the deadline for September 15th.

修改意見：

Dear Mark,

There will be a volunteer activitiy(拼寫錯誤，改為activity) in the Children's Welfare Institute Of Nanjing on this weekend . We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 08:00.This will be followed by one more arrangement(此處應該寫一個具體的活動) .At around10:00, there will be another activity after the performance(刪除 ). All of us are going to Zhongshan park to have a Picnic, while helping Lily, the youngest girl in our group, to celebrity (改為celebrate)her birthday.(給某人過生日，不要用help)I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the deadline for (刪除，RSVP before的意思就是在…之前通知我)September 15th.

第三篇

Dear Xiaohui,

There will a dinner party at my house on April 12, 2024. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at six o’clock in the evening; with the taking photos. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten o’clock, we will have face party.

I really hope you can make it, RSVP be fore April 12, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Xiaohui,

There will (加be)a dinner party at my house on April 12, 2024. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at six o’clock in the evening; with the taking photos.(刪除) This will be followed by {a dinner party｝. At around ten o’clock, we will have face party.(假面舞會是a masquerade ball )

I really hope you can make it, RSVP be fore April 12, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.

第四篇

Dear Bob,

We will to hold a school-wide party for Chinese cultural exchange on Saturday next week in School Club. I am sure you would like it, as we all know it for you wonder to hear any regarding culture of China.

There occasion will starting on seven o'clock inevening, with a dinner party for convenient we understand other person. At around nine, free exchange will begin.

If you do not any primay appointment at Saturday next week, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.

Yours Truly LI Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

There(改為The) occasion will starting (will 后面加動詞原形) on (改為at)seven o'clock in (加the)evening, with a dinner party for convenient we understand other person(不能理解你的意思). At around nine, free exchange will begin.

If you do not (加have)any primay(改為prior) appointment at(改為on) Saturday next week, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.

第五篇

Dear Bob,

There will be a New Year party holded by the Students' Union of Chinese Language and Literature Department at school stadium on January 1st. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 6:00 o'clock in the evening. This will be followed by a hot dancing farewell with all students there. At around one hour later, the game concerning not only dare or truth but also table games will start.

I really hope you can make it and celebrate the festival with us.RSVP before December 27th.

Yours faithfully Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

There will be a New Year party holded(改為held )by the Students' Union of Chinese Language and Literature Department at school stadium on January 1st. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 6:00 o'clock in the evening. This will be followed by a hot dancing(改為dance) farewell with(用詞不當，farewell with 是和…揮別的意思，而在hot dance后面還有活動) all students there. At around one hour later(at around后面加具體的時間點), the game concerning not only dare or truth but also(改為dare or truth and ) table games will start.

I really hope you can make it and celebrate the festival with us(make it 就有后面和我們一起慶祝節日的意思了.) RSVP before December 27th.

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第一篇

Dear Kate,

There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.

Campus English Corner

October 22, 2024

修改意見：

Dear Kate,

第二篇

Dear Miss Yuan,

There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 6 o’clock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 o’clock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. What’s more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Miss Yuan,

There will be a celebrity(改為celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 6 o’clock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious(拼寫錯誤，改為series) of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 o’clock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. What’s more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the(刪除) next Wednesday.

第三篇

Dear Professor,

There will an Academic Exchange of East Asia International Law at No.1 lecture theatre on April 19, 2024. We should be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 14:30. This will be followed by a communication about application of law of East Asia economic trade with other professors and experts come from Japan, Korea and other countries. At around 19:30, a dancing party will be holding in university auditorium.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before April 12,2024.

Law School PKU

April 5,2024

修改意見：

Dear Professor,

There will an Academic Exchange of East Asia International Law at No.1 lecture theatre on April 19, 2024. We should be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 14:30. This will be followed by a communication about application of law of East Asia economic trade with other professors and experts come(改為coming) from Japan , Korea and other countries. At around 19:30, a dancing party will be holding(改為held) in university auditorium.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before April 12,2024.

第四篇

Dear Bob,

There will be a summer celebrate party for teenagers at the playground of Beijing Forgin University on this weekend. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 9:00 to 11:00in the morning of the Weekend. This will be followed by a music gathering which you can communicate with others, also you can eat various kinds of delicious food. At around the next time to 5:00 pm, it is the free time for us to take a series of activities, such as playing cards, singing songs and so on.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the final date that I have informed to you.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

There will be a summer celebrate party for teenagers at the playground of Beijing Forgin (拼寫錯誤，改為Foreign)University on this weekend. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 9:00 to 11:00(start后面接的是具體的某個時間點)in the morning of the Weekend. This will be followed by a music gathering which you can communicate with others, also you can eat various kinds of delicious food. At around the next time to(刪除) 5:00 pm, it is the free time for us to take a series of activities, such as playing cards ,singing songs and so on.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the final date that I have informed to you.(寫一個具體的時間，例如本周四)

第五篇

Dear Mr.Bob,

There will be a nationwide academic communicatiom involved in the education of China in Peking University on Wendsday. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at eight o'clock am on that day. This will be followed by a dabate on social phenomenon nowadays. At around ten o'clock, there will be a interaction between parents and their childrens.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Tuesday.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Mr.Bob,

There will be a nationwide academic communicatiom(拼寫錯誤，改為communication) involved in the education of China in Peking University on Wendsday(拼寫錯誤，改為Wednesday). We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at eight o'clock am on that day(刪除). This will be followed by a dabate(拼寫錯誤，改為debate) on social phenomennon(拼寫錯誤，改為phenomenon) nowadays. At around ten o'clock, there will be a(改為an) interaction between parents and their childrens(children是child復數)

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Tuesday.

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第一篇

Dear Dr.Wang,

There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Dr.Wang,

There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

第二篇

Dear Xiaoqiang,

There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2024. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at five O'clock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven O'clock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2024.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Xiaoqiang,

There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2024. We would be honored to have you there with us.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2024.

第三篇

Dear Mary,

There will be a high school reunion at Lijiang Hall of Cuihu Hotel on May 15th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 2:30 p.m. This will be followed by a speech given by monitor in memory of our headmaster. At around 5:00 p.m, there will be a banquet held by student union of our school, in which Chef Monica and her team will provide various kinds of classical school snacks to all of the guests.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this weekend.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Mary,

There will be a high school reunion at Lijiang Hall of Cuihu Hotel on May 15th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this weekend.

第四篇

Dear Xiaoming,

There will be a ceremony for new students in our school hall on October 20.We would be honored to have you there with us .The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening .This will be followed by a dinner party including Chinese and English songs , modern dance and instrumental performance. At around ten, we will hold a small ball, in which students can have further understanding about each other and our school.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this Friday afternoon.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Xiaoming,

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this Friday afternoon.

第五篇

Dear Amy,

There will be a lecture given by Lucius Annaeus Seneca at Roman Forum on the morning of August 18th, BC50. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at nine o'clock. This will be followed by a debate between scholars. At around mid-afternoon, Nero the Emperor will show himself up.

We really hope you can make it. RSVP before the third day you have got our letter. Yours truely,

River Song and the Doctor

修改意見：

Dear Amy,

There will be a lecture given by Lucius Annaeus Seneca at Roman Forum on the morning of August 18th, BC50. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at nine o'clock. This will be followed by a debate between scholars. At around mid-afternoon, Nero the Emperor will show himself up.