考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Miss Yuan,

　　There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Miss Yuan,

　　There will be a celebrity(改為celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學(xué)你好，寫作文的時候再細心一些，注意單詞的拼寫。背單詞時要把詞義背牢。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Miss Yuan,

　　There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Miss Yuan,

　　There will be a celebrity(改為celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學(xué)你好，寫作文的時候再細心一些，注意單詞的拼寫。背單詞時要把詞義背牢。