考研英語待批改作文：

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　　第一篇

　　Dear Elle，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Elle，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 后面不能加句子，可改為your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing (appeared)in once a year campus dancing party.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2分

　　同學你好，第一段的最后一句話中，由于沒有寫not,使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下虛擬語氣的用法。另外，for 后面是不能加句子的。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　0-4分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Elle，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Elle，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 后面不能加句子，可改為your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing (appeared)in once a year campus dancing party.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2分

　　同學你好，第一段的最后一句話中，由于沒有寫not,使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下虛擬語氣的用法。另外，for 后面是不能加句子的。