考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I(改為I could) study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學你好，你的作文思路不錯，賓語從句是正常語序。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I(改為I could) study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學你好，你的作文思路不錯，賓語從句是正常語序。